fatk4p vs. wildfire
 

10 lines
no crew or hate votes

u drop your lines first... then ill go after that.......

sorry man, rollin deep called me out and i forgot all about this battle...I'll post somethin up in a minute

you come out here actin like you representin rap/
i host standin ovations you don't get one clap/
honestly lets break down what you actually stand for/
your supposed to be against me dawg what you clappin your hands for?/
maybe it's cause you don't do nothin but dick ridin/
come out the closet faggot you look like a bitch hidin/
besides, no matter what you can't excape destiny/
your a constant annoyance like bad credit, you keep vexin me/
It's ok tho, i'll kill this rodent like my words were snake venom/
you can't breathe right now cause my words got you like a plenom/
and since it takes breath to speech, i don't expect a response/
cause i got more ideas than the a new renaissance/

ill be your assasin goin to dump and trash ya body//
walk like nuthin happened with a smile as they stop me//
yo dawg why you join me ten hours after battle//
like football cuase when you wait to late you get tackled//
usually i kick the bitches like this in the basket//
maybe this time my mac can afford the tax on a casket//
my ryme lines too much so get this guy a pacer//
i pulled the plug on his life lines with a peice of paper//
as you see my concience pass by like a hired liar//
the name on the warrant will be labeled wildfire//

break down

wildfire had a better opener and closer he kept the punchz comin at this kid didnt really see to many personalz though the only thing really fucked u pwaz structure but so iz minez an that meanz structure aint shit lol

k4p dont know where to start lemme see um u had good structure but everythang else waz shaky just work on wordplay an that will make it sound way better keep elevatin

vote/wildfire

you wanna help me out and tell me exactly what personals are?...you said i didn't have too many....but i always thought a personal was somethin directly at the person...and pretty much all of it was directed towards him personally...i'm prolly wrong tho..i'm new to this..so help me out...

ok the low down

Wildfire-good opener and closer very good with the vocab and i really enjoyed listening to your flow the. one line compliments the previouse one. ur steppin up ur game good keep up the shit

fatk4p-good flow good wordplay but i didnt feel the structure of the verse you tried to go in to many different directions you gotta stick to one mindframe and play it out through the whole ryhme.

Cunclusion- this was a close battle but i got to give it to wildfire for the flow of each line everything was together and no lines were left open good job to the both of you good battle

this battle was nothing great but...

wildfire- good verse, it seemed like u kept sayin the same shit in the beggining because u said something about clapping to lines in a row, but you had good flow, punches, lack of personals, threw in a multi or 2 (by the way, a personal is something directed at the opponents name, age, location, sex etc...) overall good verse

fat-i think the reason u lost this, is because u made this like a story, not a diss, u kept going on the belief that u were a hitman and hired to kill wildfire, not really much of a fiss verse.

v/wildfire

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118632
hit this shit up

a very close battle indeed...wildfire had good punches and everything flowed nicely,
k4p had some alright punches, but they didnt hit as hard, so i gotta give this one to widlfire..oh yeah and anybody here go vote on my battles!!!!
youngstar vs. bri skee 420 <--that ones been goin on forever were triyn 2 get it closed
and bri skee 420 vs. phat mic
hit em up!!!

uppin for votes...come on people...this has been open for like 2 weeks now

uppin....only 2 more votes...come on...thats it and it's done...i need to close these old battles

This was a close battle....Wildfire had a decent opener an he flowed throughout his verse an managed to end it wit a good closer
Fat he flowed alwell but he didn't really have any punches...but it was a solid verse an good structure but just didn't have any punhes..all you need was one strong personal an you would have one. But you both drop some nice shit my vote...Wildfire

Oh an yo holla back, I need some honest votes on this shit.. one
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118296