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Rollin_Deep VS Atticus
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yo rolling deep can u vote on these 2 battles of mine please....
quickpunch vs marvolous(bannishment battle loser leaves the board) quickpunch vs big'n i'll come back here 2 vote once uve both droped...so in the mean time can yal vote on those 2 battles...thanks |
.... quickpunch its all good tho... and rollin thought u would b on w/e im droppin
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How can u be a clique in yourself nigga 'roll deep'/
that can't be when I don't see 'any G's...'/ w/e the crime rate increase/ yall see'n 'more blood' than the 'red sea'/ nigga 'dread. this. new. substance'/ This is my stage and I got this audience laughin at you at ya own expense/ If i gave 'bitches pics' they lose breath from this 'rap. game. crown. prince'/ I say without reluctance/ rollin deep U face me wit 'no squad'? when I got demons behind me on a 'rampage wit no sense'/ comin wit 'pure instinct' like 'beasts'/ Da Fuck u lookin at? lemme 'spit on ya face' so my 'rhymes feast'/ contact wit me? nigga be careful who your eye meets/ U like a prostitute i aint gotta 'spit game just to fuck you'/ drive by his bus route/ show Roll deep and his friend chuck what this tuck do/ 'dispense' on this nigga from 'cleveland' to 'penn state' wit 'drop tops'/ lyrically rockin this clit and it don't stop/ 25 minute spit drop whenever deep |
good spit, can you hit this battle up for me bud, I alrdy won once but it came back cuz one vote got D'Qed so vote on that and I will vote here when its ova wit.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118203 |
up... even tho the nigga aint on
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Atticus i just sit back and laugh at all that you spit...//
dont worry i wont feed off yours..because i dont bite pieces of shit// i would spend more time..if i had to guard my position// but your wack commit suicide then you might finnaly get some recognition// Your offense is hittin as hard as flickin peas when there mushy// like i said i would put up some defense if you werent such as pussy// Im about take this bitch to the ammo store to refuel his rap// because right now your oily and about as hot as a piece of crap// its people like you who give a meaning to the word arrogance// i can be cocky because ill tell you strait..you have no chance Atticus// your whole name sounds like your something from macbeth// boilin in my cauldron and your about 2 be sent to yo death// i would give you some better disses if i felt i had the time// but this ones over..leave site..ur plain wack...and you cant fuckin ryhme// |
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come on man im lookin to end this shit quick............................................. ...........
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aight rollin deep took this one basically because i could understand his and i found it hard to flow wit atticus and ths shit didnt really ryhme all tha good..
rollins opener was a decent opener and some of the punchlines was hot i didnt realy feel any of atticus's... Vote:Rollin_Deep Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
aight rollin got this one..atticus you really need to work on your structure because its hard as fuck to understand...you would probably be a great deal better if you worked on that and ryhmed abit more....
rollin basically had hotter punchlines and flowed alot better.... Vote:Rollin |
............................................uppin. .................................................. 3 more and this bitch i KO'd.............................................. .uppiinnnnnnnnnn
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both were wack....
Rollin_Deep: Punches:6/10..some hard others a bit played... Flow:3/10..lines were to long... Wordplay:..5/10...not bad for a newb but use longer words... Structure:3/10..gen lines to long... Vocab:5/10....some nice words Personals:1/10..none realy efevetive Overall...5/10 Aittuss: Punches:5/10...some week tho...siome hiting hard.. Flow: 7/10...keep the lines at a gud legnth Wordplay:5/10....use longer words dawg.. Structure:...7/10....much better...kept the lines da same lenght Vocab:4/10....needs work Personals:...3/10..agen not realy good.. Overall..6/10 v/atticus |
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