$$upreme Vs Afterword
 

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.... IN THE LEFT CORNER...... FROM CALIFORNIA..... THE DOMINANT .... THE GREATEST IN THE WORLD.... $$UPREME .....


ROUND 1) IM IN SHAPE TO DISPATCH YOUR FACE YOU BETTER GET READY TO RUMBLE*
$$UPREME IS THE KING YOUR JUST A PEST, I'LL ACCIDENTLY SQUASH YOU LIKE AN ELPHANT ROAMING THE JUNGLE*

ROUND 2) I'M APPLYING THE PRESSURE, YOUR HEART'S RACING MAKING A NON STOP BEAT*
I GOT YOU SWEATING MORE THEN A OBESE KID AT AN "ALL YOU CAN EAT*"

ROUND 3)IT'S MORE THEN LIKELY MY WORD PLAY GOT YOU FEELIN' DIZZY*
YOU'LL GET TOSSED OUT THE GAME QUICKER THEN 2 KIDS WITH A FRISBY*

ROUND 4) LISTEN YOU DON'T RULE NOTHING IN CALIFORNIA DOWN-SOUTH*
THE ONLY THING AFTERWORDS RUNNIN IN THE WEST COAST IS HIS MOUTH*

ROUND 5) THIS KID MUST BE A VEGETARIAN, DOESN'T LIKE TO FINISH HIS BEEF*
$$UPREME WILL EAT AFTERWORD'S QUICKER THEN A CANNIBAL WITH BIG TEETH* 1...2...3...4...5...6...7...8...9...10........KNOC K OUT

yo supreme that was hott shit...i'll vote on this battle after the other kat drops....for now can u peep this out as ur waitin for him 2 drop

quickpunch vs marvolous

check
yo

I flow to the extreme, like im fresh out of the bing, and i'm starvin/
and since you a supreme pizza,
I'll keep ya dough, and eat all the other toppins//

i may just jack-son, like im Samuel on dat Shaft-shit///
i flow with a pas-sion, and it will get-drastic,
as my airborne gasses make ya whole Class-Sick////

so dude, take them $$ out of ya name,
u are no-where near being close to Ma$on Betha/////
so just let-us( lettuce) trend settas, rejoice and relish(2x), in our victory, and you'll never catch-up( ketchup), b/c u rhyme so pitifully/////

he said he would beat me, by simply talking giberish,
so i shoved my gat down his throat////
and he broke like blunts we smoke, runnin
like BIG & PAC or Kiss & Ghost///(runnin is the song titile)

on the real yur not supreme, yur just suffering,
from multiple delusional episodes//
i kick exceptional concepts ya know,
while u flow like Money Mike( Next Friday) got a hold of ya testicles!

just a lil sumtin
peace

aight first off supreme,i dont like people using stories in there stuff unless there is some obvious relevant theme,i understand it but everyoen doesnt so dont do it..

as for afterword ,he came off ,and posted his words,, straighforward no added pizzazz trying to make a story like ssupreme with1...2.3...4...5..6. nah not happening

afterword had precise flow that made you think it was structures nicely and showed authority over ssupreme.who barely poster the 10 lines and theyawere in bold ot look bigger like he wrote a lil more than waht he did which wasnt much at all example follow below

afterword:i may just jack-son, like im Samuel on dat Shaft-shit///
i flow with a pas-sion, and it will get-drastic,
as my airborne gasses make ya whole Class-Sick////

so dude, take them $$ out of ya name,
u are no-where near being close to Ma$on Betha/////
so just let-us( lettuce) trend settas, rejoice and relish(2x), in our victory, and you'll never catch-up( ketchup), b/c u rhyme so pitifully/////

and here is ssupreme:ROUND 2) I'M APPLYING THE PRESSURE, YOUR HEART'S RACING MAKING A NON STOP BEAT*
I GOT YOU SWEATING MORE THEN A OBESE KID AT AN "ALL YOU CAN EAT*"

ROUND 3)IT'S MORE THEN LIKELY MY WORD PLAY GOT YOU FEELIN' DIZZY*
YOU'LL GET TOSSED OUT THE GAME QUICKER THEN 2 KIDS WITH A FRISBY*

do i really need to say anymore?

check my battle
Vc vs. shadows edge

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118568

Yeah... $$ had weak punches and overused shit for his rhymes mostly. The flow is mediocre, a bit long with no change to rhyme scheme or anything, no multis really, nothing extra.

Afterword had punches that were hit or miss, some hit, some didn't. Started a bit weak "toppings"... wtf, but got better. At least he had an interesting flow and tried some new things with the lyrics. Both sides could use improvement but I vote afterword.

Return the favor, fellas.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118568
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118554

gyd lookin out yall
keep the gtd shyt roollin in
fyi "supreme" pizza= many toppings
(bit weak "toppings"... wtf, but got better)
uppin peace

Dude I know what a supreme pizza is, I just thought the diss was wierd. Anyway, return the favor, give ya honest opinion on my battles.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118568
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118554

yo yo yo
lets get some love in this peace
uppin

yo this was a one sided battle from beginning to finish
Flow: After
Structure: After
Punches: After
Vocab: After
Word usage: After
Wordplay: After
Supreme's verse had no punches or wordplay whatsoever u need a lot of practive dogg
After had a solid verse, weak opener but it picked up throughout an he had a good closer, good shit. Even though you really didn't need all that to beat him.

yo drop a few lines and a vote,
and ill be sure to hit ur battle up.
gud lookkin out

peace

Uppin 4 Votes......
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if i may beg to differ i liked the way he set that shit up
he had betta flo and opener and closer
um afta's opener ain't even ryme and the sumpreme pizza punch
but after did have some good punches in there
but i think sumpreme took this one slightly
no hatin..jus facts i spose

check it supreme got dis cuz i was feelin his punches
after word u used hsi name against him i liked dat
it was a good battle feelin both verses

best line-ROUND 5) THIS KID MUST BE A VEGETARIAN, DOESN'T LIKE TO FINISH HIS BEEF*------------------so dude, take them $$ out of ya name

worste line-neitha had 1

punches-supreme
vocab-supreme
struture-afterword
multis-afterword
flow-supreme
opening-afterword barley
ending-supreme

win-supreme

Uppin 4 Votes.....
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