some shit to show what i got
 

:shoot: tips hit ya dome peice and leave ya brains bubblin/ make u die quicker than the price of crack dublin/ im gangsta know as one of hells youngins/ .45 on my side like an old man walkin a cane/ lab specialist at the crime scene chalkin ya frame/ extended clips in case i miss but the chances is so low/ id be damn if i catch ur ass slippin and solo/ cuz my ammo supplyin more heat than sun rays/ when they find u it aint nuthin but maggets and blood stain/ if u aint gonna squeeze it whats the good to up thangs/ no responce from the barrell ya mind gonna up brains/ woofin get ya organs in jars like hydro/ ya new address is the morgue freshley filled wit nine holes/ hit man so good hit ur ass wearin a blind fold/ duck and roll outta site of my barrells vision/ cuz when i cock it im bustin wit army precision/ smart decision or not i give no fuck i live to die/ gangstafied shoot u in front of the jakes n it'll still be wise/ go out like queen in set it off but stay alive/ as long as u die im happy wit the outcome/ ya out done got sent off by ya click for a trap son!!!!

holla at me tell me what you think :shoot:

u started off on the soft side but u picked it up in the middle from "cuz my ammo supplyin more geat than sun rays" down was good but if u tryna be hardcore u need to step up n come harder than that. but it was good n a lil on the tight side