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Leisure 04-08-04 07:16 PM

..Mass.
 
The abolition that I start with my abnormal flows**
stunns growth on all enemies and powerful foes**
no treaty like N-A-T-O**
more like a war in a territory you don’t know**
gats popping- cats running- it’s a reality show**
no real accomplishments or expansions**
no luxury cars-pools or mansions**
hollywood access relays the stress in miles per hour**
leaving footprints and holes in ya ass, facial expression sour**
the juice- the force- the strength- the power**
is useless if the mind can’t process, even devour **
knowledge....

Verbatim 04-08-04 07:59 PM

This was pretty good
Flow was good for the most part
Your rhyming was real good, good choice of words to rhyme with
Vocab was basic, but good
Structure coulda been a little better,
But it was still a dope drop and a good read

Check out ma crew "Copywrite"
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118603


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