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accomplishment 04-08-04 09:44 PM

accomplishment versus Kuniva (about time)
 
aight yo 5-10 bars
no d.r. hate votes
no biting feeding or recycling
drop first verse due 15 min after check in i'll drop right after you
yo gettterrr dun

anxiety 04-08-04 09:49 PM

15 minutes, ok, i smell a prewrite but ok, plus its not like ur not writin the 15 minutes that im writen, i wonder why it says no feedin, cause ur already done, haha

p.s. check in

accomplishment 04-08-04 09:50 PM

yeah ok i'm make this as personal as possible

anxiety 04-08-04 09:54 PM

yeah, but uve been waitin to battle me sence last night, dont tell me you couldnt have some up with a few personals in that time, o wait, its u, maybe u couldnt have

accomplishment 04-08-04 10:00 PM

so regardless ur assuming i have pre written shit you pretty much detirmened you werent gonna battle me so i didnt write shit and i was playin ball since like 11 dis morn so i didnt have time to write shit

anxiety 04-08-04 10:01 PM

if their is a pointless beef on this site, u may see accomplishment
so im settlin it now, sit back and watch me stomp this bitch
he got pissed at me, cause i wrote FUCK CLASS SIC in bold
like poker, before you get ur ass kicked just fold
gettin mad at me, for makin fun of ur crew
but class has two s's, its like ur maken fun of em too
this guy really wanted to battle me, thats why he follows me around this site
goin in every forum im in, tryna convince me his shit is tight
it will be a true ACCOMPLISHMENT, if he can get enough dr votes,
to win a battle, but compared to his verse, theirs more rhyming lines in a barcode

anxiety 04-08-04 10:01 PM

shut up and spit ur pre-written shit

accomplishment 04-08-04 10:15 PM

yo dawg that was quick i'ma key up somthin real quick gimme like ten minutes aight

accomplishment 04-08-04 10:29 PM

CLAS SIC.....Kuniva's a BITCH

YO Check IT

said ya could see the future, so i kicked ya in ya face, brought ya "eyes to my "feet"....
end up wit yo shoes onna "lamp-post", yeah you got "ties-to-the-street".../

spit wit me, get ya dome-shook, yo losses got mo "numbers" than a fuckin "phone-book"
this wasnt realize by him cuz i'm takin his "limbs" like i'ma fuckin "bone-crook"

bitch retire,.Wannabe rapper, kuniva copy any emcee to aspire...
hawked a loogie on a dayton, bitch claimen he spitten through wires.../

A-1, get-out! Ya fake! Take Off! cuz ya crew seein mo "beef" then the fuckin "steak sauce"...
talk bout d.r.'s this kid got more alias's then "n. cage" in da movie "Face-off".../

yo bitch welcome to "ClAS" today ya learn how accomplishment whips fuckin ass.../
Im da "Sic"kest, if requirment was to fuckin loe, kuniva dawg you pass.../

Ill

M&rk 04-08-04 10:32 PM

accomplishments a FEMALE, pimp sellin is own pussy is his only street sales. u lyin like the tims beatin the kings its a tall tale. stillin s.c. hittion ma's pu. c. wish me well. haha bitch jus post your pre-writin shit already

accomplishment 04-08-04 10:36 PM

your a fuckin joke quit wit yo freepostin bull shit and by da way NO CREW VOTES

anxiety 04-08-04 11:13 PM

umm... just so you know, by u sayin my loss colum has a phonebook, u dissed urself, because u have 7 more losses than me

Shadows edge 04-08-04 11:14 PM

kuniva: started hot, but then you fell off real bad, the "sight-tight" bar is waay too long and ruins the flow. did have a decent personal, good punches in the begining though. the close would have been good but again, no flow or rhyme ...

acc: good crew diss, only i seen that same play on words already today. your punches started hot and stayed hot, except the close was a bit weak and overused. even if i count the "a1" shit against you cuzz you mighta ripped it off someone else (not saying you did), i still think you win for the ill punches and better flow.

vote: acc

return the favor, honest votes on my battles.

anxiety 04-08-04 11:16 PM

r votes
barcode

i hardly ever do a perfect rhyme, so i guess ur right, damn, i must suck, i never rhyme

Adebisi 04-08-04 11:20 PM

Kuniva wins.... much better structure... came with some weak lines but a few nice concepts.... basically it was just a better ocntstructed verse

Acc.... work out your stretched lines kiddo... it ruins your verse, if you'd leanr how to word things and write them properly you may have some decent punches... right now you dont


Vote - Kuniva

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(it'll be open tomorrow as there is a couple bad votes)


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