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Shadows edge 04-09-04 02:03 AM

shadow vs atticus
 
ok, i just keystyled this shit.. i'ma post it now cuz you asked to battle, 10 lines cuz im tired and want to go to bed.. no d/r, hate votes etc.

good luck man

Shadows edge 04-09-04 02:07 AM

Gun with full chamber, n you playing Russian roulette
You challenged me to a battle, shit’s what you get
With this one verse, I forever change your life biography
With this one punch, I rearrange your face geography
facing me in a battle is worse than lucifer’s torture
spit hotter than hellfire, call me the scalp scorcher
least now your hairless nut sack match your top
call me when you finally get a ball to drop
atticus step to the stage and sadly get booed badly
i locked his ass in the basement, changed his name to boo radley

Shadows edge 04-09-04 02:08 AM

yo shit there supposed to be an emtpy line between "drop" and "atticus" but whatever, y'all get the point

Atticus. 04-09-04 02:14 AM

i knew u'd follow up

the hoods answer to gettin the 'burbs-clean'/
was 2 get rid edge this 'herb' by any neccessary means/
When U overcome my 'angel dust' U gain 'wings'/
check you if you 'flinch' fuck you/
att won't 'swing' at you/
he only 'kills-kings'/
Don't sing in your title matches/
you bring out the bitch in yaself/
cap you if I lose steal your belt/
and toss your 'strip of crap' on my shelf nigga/

w/e

Atticus. 04-09-04 02:29 AM

-_-

Shadows edge 04-09-04 02:57 PM

upping for votes... but i dont really care about this battle, vote on my other ones damnit ^

Shadows edge 04-09-04 05:19 PM

uppin again... be cool if i could at least get one vote ^

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-09-04 05:24 PM

Lol I Guess I Shall Return The Favor' ..

Shadows edge Got This Shit Though.. "Weak Battle" Because There Were Very Few Lines But He Took It... In Most Every Category...

Punches: Shadows - Check It

With this one verse, I forever change your life biography
With this one punch, I rearrange your face geography
facing me in a battle is worse than lucifer’s torture

Flow: Shadows Had The Better Flow

Stucture: About The Same - But I Liked Shadows Structure A Bit Better

Multies: Shadows -- Checkity Check

atticus step to the stage and sadly get booed badly
i locked his ass in the basement, changed his name to boo radley

Not Bad For A Closer

Vote: Shadows edge

Murder Phreak 04-09-04 08:29 PM

Aiight this was one helluva battle I'm talkin like pseudo-epic (not really but w/e)
::::THA BREAKDOWN:::::
Punches- Shadow had some fire fire punches and Atticus's didn't seem to hit hard at all

Flow-Atticus had good lines with the exception of one (was 2 get rid edge this 'herb' by any neccessary means) that threw off his whole verse but overall i liked the structure

Multis- Shadow had the only multis in this one.

personals- ummmm didn't see any hehe

Opener- Atticus was better by definition but it had that one hideous line in it but hey Shadow's opener wasn't that bad either

Closer- Shadow Definately Shadow....that Boo Radley shit was awesome!!!

VOTE-SHADOW

anxiety 04-09-04 08:54 PM

shadow just owned u atticus, at least you made a feeble attemt to rhyme this time, shadow, nice punches and ur closer alone owned atticus, i hate that fucking book though.

v/shadow

hit this up
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118632

NeW:BreeD 04-10-04 07:55 AM

ok u both came hard n the punches were direct but i was feelin shadows flow like the others said my vote gots 2 go 2 shadow he jus wanted it more!!1

Shadows edge 05-04-04 08:13 PM

wow.. old battle not closed... uppin because i feel like it...

Shadows edge 05-04-04 09:12 PM

again.....

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JPoll 05-06-04 02:40 AM

that boo radley shits been done...and done...and done again


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