Nyne Myll Vs NeW:Breed
 

ok im checkin in i wanna an that votes must be explained clearly n fully please>?? peace

ok wat u packin a 9mm wat gat? fuck thats pack a punch,
see i dont need a weapon i eat mcz like u 4 lunch, shit im hungry now,
but u taste faul..i'll sick u back up, shorein ur insiders in a plastic pot,
u a menice like denis wit ur ellastic sling shot, claim u a G but u not,
ur cold as fuck wishin u were hot! u a pest 2 me, jus like a spot,
but u easily ereased coz spots go pop, ure soon 2 burst,
shit ive seen sum bad verses in my time but gotsta b the worsed,
ure rhymes are really stupid shit they really silly,
u aint gota gun but a 9 milli willy,
so thats why u get no pussy u rediculious,
shit u a particular part boy u cliterious, fanny 4 a face,
jus ask me 2 slow down if u cant maintain the pace, i
'll whip the smile of ya face, so boy not smerk,
ive never found it so easy 2 diss a bitch, fem u jus got merked!!

aight gone a lil over so sorry but fuck it uppin votes please

votes plzzzz i wanna get thids battle dun n dusted u no?!!

Punches: Nyne kept bringing it, and each line was a decent punch at least. The last line is kinda overused, but still ok for a closer. I didn't really feel any of Breed's stuff, except that one ill personal "9 milli willi"... that's a burn.

Personals: Like I said, all to Breed.. didn't see one from nyne

Flow: I dunno... nyne had pretty good flow but it felt really mechanical.. i thought NB was off at times but at least had some nice variance... worked for me so i make it a tie.

All in all, pretty tight... but i go with breed cuz i like his style more.. nyne you said no writtens but your shit felt like a pre, no variation or anything, no personals, nothing. at least fuck around with world play, multis, something to spice it up.

Hit up my battles.

yo that was a new breed of garbage, no h8
4real dogg ya ryhmes was playschool, and ya punches was non-existant, =elevate!
u got a lil flow but its repetetive and flavor-less like old gum

mack milli came with it, all around, one-sided in my opinion
"You could have H.I.V and you wouldn't be as ill as me//
ya even got your name off of a 50 Cent DVD//"
-the paparazzi/ nazzi line was phat too

i just call it how i c it

peace

c'mon 1-1 we nee votes on this battle plzzzzzz

Nyne Myll: You had some alright flow but your punches were kinda basic. You didn't really have any metas or multis and a personal would have been nice. You can't just spit rhymes, you gotta spit them at someone, That's why this is called a battle. One line did stand out to me though........

torturin MC's as if they were Jews and i was a Nazi//
my glock lights up ya block like flashes from the paparazzi//
^Kinda hot.....lol

NeW:BreeD: Your rhymes are all over the place. You never really established a flow at all. I understand that you like to just keystyle and let the typo's go, but no one else understands it. Take your time and reread what you write, it only takes a minute or two. You also had a line that stuck out to me........

ure rhymes are really stupid shit they really silly,
u aint gota gun but a 9 milli willy,
^Only real personal in the battle

Overall, this was two newbs battling who are both gonna get better. That's what these votes are all about. But it is a competition in which only one can win..............

Vote: Nyne Myll for more established flow and punches

Oh yeah............ Fix the size of your text. That shit is almost impossible to read

^for Nyne Myll

aight thanks for the votes and all the feedback, keep 'em comin!

Nyne Myll Takes This One.His Verse Had More Punches & Better Disses.Most Of His Punches Were Poorly Delivered Or Had Played Concepts.He Takes It In The Punches Department Mainly For His Usage & Not Strength.New Breed's Verse Barely Even Flowed & In Some Parts He Didnt Make Sense.Seemed Like He Was Talkin Jibberish.Elevate

Vote-Nyne Myll

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