Oc6 The Caustic vs. s-killz
 

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oc6 stupid ass posted it in call-outs
here is the link to show that i am not cheating
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...849#post1225849

I'm 15 years, but watch me step up like a man/
Bitch, I'm about to murder you with one mic in my hand/
Find your self looking at me then dangerously pinned/
I'm already at the point where i'm originally sinned/
Say your good-byes, as you won't be missed/
And I laugh as you historically become erased and don't exist/
I'm fully automatic, shocking you up like static/
The act of you fallin' down full of lead is more than dramatic/
You couldn't take a shit on me if you were able to squat/
Chambers revolving around your Skillz with 6 or 7 shots/
What you call skills won't get you that far/
Battle once with me I'll leave an emotional scar/
Oc6 Vs Skillz, this is knife through butter/
My action verbs hit you so hard that your eye's shutter/
Watch the words that come off your lips/
My skill will cast over you like a solar eclipse/

Holla.

^^^^^^^^^^^^^My Verse^^^^^^^^^^^^

come on man I did that shit in 5 mins, lets go.

that was oc6"s^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^












heres mine
yo dis bitch is stupid....posting his vese in call-outs
ill hollow-out his body....and use his organs as baseballs
chainsaw, cutting him... like sports try-outs, and staining walls
with his blood.... hes mad cause i left his girl's mouth, cum crusted
he was betrayed by the only person he trusted, his mama
now hes a bitch.... the way he deals with the drama
leave you in trauma..... after this battle
the only level hes higher than me is his..... blood pressure
yo dude relax.... dont get tense, rest assure, my pleasure
only comes when i defeat skilled opponnents... so this is boring
im snoring..... i slept thorugh your whole verse... i hope it was your worse
i stole you in the eye.... the way i steal a purse, i never cease!

ok the breakdown of the battle s like this

OC6-pretty basic but great use of syllables your flow was tight and i really felt the verse for a newbie that shit was tight keep it up work on your multis and personaly

Skillz-where do i start first of all i gotta say that i think u can do much better than that the whole point of rap is to ryhme and i think only one line really ryhmes in verse your skillz will get better just keep working on it. work on your vocabulary, multis personals,metaphors the works. you have the basics down you just need to hoane your skillz and your style

good battle to the both of u

"im snoring..... i slept thorugh your whole verse... i hope it was your worse
i stole you in the eye.... the way i steal a purse, i never cease!"
u dont call that a multi?
i had more than one bar that rhymed
your vote was bullshit but wateva
im not bitching

more votes please, and have a good explanation

Uppin' on votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Come on people!

Come on people! Let's vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

check da breakdown

S-killz, verse flowed well with good structre but your punches and personals were very simple you have to do more than just callen him "stupid" but there were some tight ass shit in there....but overall elevate some

Oc6 nice verse flowed well somewhat sketchy in someparts but punches and personals were complex and creative so that made it more enjoyable, i didnt find much metas or multies but vocab was also good

overallboth guys elavate some but vote goes to OC.6 da caustic

YO DROPPA VOTE ON MYBATTLE THANXZ

Dang, I had to figure this post out...kinda confusing..

Flow:Oc6...his flow was better, went over quite smoothly and was easier to read

Vocab:Oc6....but overall it was equal...both could use some work in the vocab area

Originality:Oc6...he was more creative with his rhyme..he didnt just stick some words together cause they rhymed

Vote goes to: Oc6

Thanks for the vote and input guys. Still need somemore votes!

yeah, both of u had kinda basic stuff, kinda boring to read, but O had the better verse i think, just need to stop talkin bout urself so much, u had a lot of my's and i's, and s-killz, really need to work on punches man,

peep this
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118632

Uppin on votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Please!

Let's close this battle people! Couple of more votes!!!

aight aight
Oc you came nicely .. flowed nicely had a few good punches ran smooth start to finish .....

s-kills - you can do way better your style was a lil off .... your punches werent many but flow was nice ran pretty smooth ... b
but i think i have to give it to oc because i felt his was more grown and what people want to hear and skills is still on what newbs rap about more ..
My vote oc