lk63 vs. Murder Phreak
 

Iight it begins.....go ahead and spit first I'm gonna go take a look at some of your old battles and peep your style. Hey you know the rules no dick ride votes, no haters, and blah blah blah.....OH YEAH no line cap so go as long as you want (or as short as you want) JUST BRING IT!!!!

yo i'll hit this up when its done if you vote on some of my battles.

sounds like a dick ryder to me, already hitting up ya battle

Beating me, this kid got a lot of hope, like a tampon, running outa Rope
He probably be screaming dick ryder, every time I get a Vote
This kids a tax-payer, now he demands to be an MC Slayer
Man reading your lines, is like tryna decipher, already used toilet Paper
U could do more damage, if ya write ya raps with a pointed Eraser
Ya obsolete, ya rhymeless, man I’m just so full of surprises
No one will even notice if I replace ya rhymes with Vanilla Ice’s
Ima have ya text score start with a minus, ya aint no Fighter
U think ya burning mc’s, cuz you got a CD Writer
I’m just rippin ya to pieces, ya lines their, but ya punches aint Working
I’ll rip out ya spine, and just start stompin
Forcing ya neck further back then ya Foreskin
Now trust Me, you did not wanna fuck with Me
Cuz ya text more fucked up then ya girls ESP
Believe me, ya text like a “Jack In The Box”, it loves to fuck out
You wanna make voters happy, then click - Log Out
And when ya screen turns Grey, be happy,
Cuz ya just made the whole fucken sites Day
You aint woth shit, ya dick’s like an abandoned dusty Antique
Ya make me sick, this battle should be renamed LK versus da Geek
Man after ya red ya own shit, ya’ll have the headline read,
The Suicide Murder Phreak

ok kid lets get this shit started, when ya gonna drop

checkin in homeboi gimme a minute to drizop!!!!

it's Finally Over
 

Not Bad but still not enough to beat the Phreak. Did I hear a bell ring? Must be cuz someone's about to get SCHOOLED


Bitch you aint ILL you don't even got tha WILL to KILL/ Your rhymes are more tired then methheads on SYROQUIL/A sleepin PILL you revoke the Damage you DEAL/ With braindead rhyme SKILL a level lower then NILL

You wanna make your move? I ain't got shit to prove/ cuz this whole board is down with tha Murder Groove/ There's a glitch in your dome your mind blown alone/ cuz at the end of it all I'm takin tha title home

You say you got this plan to destroy my fam/ but I'm a psycho muthafucka like tha SON OF SAM/ So if you tried some sneaky shit then you betta bet/ I wouldn't hesitate to send a Shank through your neck

I done paid my dues (son) you act confused (son)/ This is the game of rap and you're doomed to lose (son)/ Talent seems to disown you you never knew/ maybe that's why they won't let you in a crew

Oh well I guess god has to keep the balance/ cuz for every dope MC like me there's one without talents/ and that would be be you but it's all good/ you could work at that Mickey D's near your hood

best of luck to you and your future of flippin burgers......I'll just stack another G off of MC Murder!!!!

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pretty eazy to judge this shit

murdaman came wit tha murderas shit had a grip of multiz but the punchz were good not good az usual but didnt need to be on this battle didnt see to many personalz either but structure waz good and it flowed well

lk63 it waz ok a few good punchz and not many personalz and some of the punchz were a lil bit played out get creative and bring that raw shit structure waznt good either but structure shit dont matter to me just elevate an u be ite


vote/murder phreak

uppin for votes thanks for the vote ghost ya'll take it easy

ahhhh good afternoon all u beautiful ppl uppin let's get some votes eh?

murderphreak had a better attack and i really was likin his flow

^^^^^ if a mod sees this then they're gonna take it off for being too short but thanks for the vote anyways but I'm gonna have to report it cuz it was too vague. srry homes.

real tight... lk had some good disses, like:

Ya obsolete, ya rhymeless, man I’m just so full of surprises
No one will even notice if I replace ya rhymes with Vanilla Ice’s
Ima have ya text score start with a minus, ya aint no Fighter
U think ya burning mc’s, cuz you got a CD Writer

The rest was really weak though... and there was so much, if you had cut half of it out and just added a couple strong bars you could have had this battle. phreak just came more consistently and didn't have a lot of filler, all of his rhymes connected even if not the best.

good battle both of you.. lk you got some nice potential, just need to concentrate on making sure your punches are solid and consistent. props.

return the favor on my battles...

thanks for tha vote shadow I appreciate it. thank you for elaborating.

lol... n i didn't even give you any feedback.. your third piece was kinda weak, but only for me. i know that shit works for a lot of people but i just aint into that so much :shrug: that first piece was good with the continuous rhyme though. keep representing man.