Oc6 (The Caustic) VS Choppa City
 

Aight city, you wanted it:

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- 15-20 Linez
- I'll spit first to set this shit off
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- First to 5 votes, you know how it goes.


Holla.

My Verse
 

This mothafucka's city is about to get chopped/
Bitch your text skills couldn't beat me if they were co-opt/

This vocabulary is goin' to keep commin' at you until i break your bone frame/
Let me say that I'm taking this battle, its already a known proclaim/

It's not what range you got, of the fiery flame/
It's where you aim your spot, and mine is pointed right at your fame/

You think by me commin' at you was a horrible mistake/
But I'm not trippin' because I already know that your a deplorable fake/

Your facing me, not knowing what the definition of nice is/
After this battle, your gonna get made a bitch, which will cause an identity crisis/

Look, you and your city don't even match the size of my dick/
So how the fuck could you add up to the size of the lyrics I spit/

Your a simple cat with no momorails/
You couldn't teenage spit if Lil' Bow' Wow' gave you a tutorial/

My quick-to-write skills are the rarest/
But when you try to text write, even the computer is embarrassed/

the tone has been set! com on city.

dis hoe str8 up gettin pimped....5 fingers 2 da face,cuz his username dont even make since......pop yo eyeballs out,make u look like stevie wonder.....stone cold yo spits,and taze yo lips like a stunner......u wack grab yo rhymes and G-O.....cuz u more fake then 50cent compared wit miss cleo......go 2 be rumors no doubt in his mind....rip his vocal cords,and fracture his linez.....close line dis trick,hang yo wack spits up wit a hanger.....yo shits a joke im laughing like u was cedric the entertainer......slash yo throat,revoke yo lyrics.........im mortal combat but i dont think i wanna take yo wack spirit.......who the fuck r u....neva shouldve answered u trick.....cuz im wating time or am i wasting a spit.....step up and get ripped.....
special ed writer...yo lyrics is disabilty.....u have no abilty...i can use vinilla ices verse on u and still have more agiltity.........fake ONYX now who rhymes harder.....thats wat u get son,4 comin at yo farther......how he want it give it 2 dis post biter...better off goin off signing mystical as yo ghost writer.....dis nigga rhyme 2 da telly......he fuck wit me he ge pissed on like r.kelly.....when u beta me is da time c-murder get out...il kidnapp dis trick and carry him home 2 michale jacksons house.....get dis nigga outta here thru wit this shroom.....take yo ass back 2 msn and keep doin chatrooms....

oc6: nice punches on 3rd to last and last bars.. got some ok personals in a couple times, once in the opener. had some nice world play and complex rhymes. could use some work on the flow, when one line takes twice as long to say as the other it kinda makes your structure weak, and that second to last bar didn't even have a good punch, surely you could put something better there?

cc: blah.. the personal was weak and the only good punch you had was at the end... copped a joke (r kelly pissin) from dave chapelle... use a played out micheal jackson joke.. overall kinda weak. better flow than oc6, but not enough.

vote: oc6

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Ok
 

Thanks shadow for the input and vote. 1-0 my lead. UPPIN ON VOTES ^^^^^^^^^^^^

Votes!
 

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iight iight .....
Breakdown....Oc6-This mothafucka's city is about to get chopped/
Bitch your text skills couldn't beat me if they were co-opt/
An Ok opener attempt for a personal as an opener nice...
This vocabulary is goin' to keep commin' at you until i break your bone frame/
Let me say that I'm taking this battle, its already a known proclaim/
WorDed a lil wrong but see where you were goin wit it...It's not what range you got, of the fiery flame/
It's where you aim your spot, and mine is pointed right at your fame/
Ok an obivious attempt at wordplay...
You think by me commin' at you was a horrible mistake/
But I'm not trippin' because I already know that your a deplorable fake/
Slap not quite a punch lol....
Your facing me, not knowing what the definition of nice is/
After this battle, your gonna get made a bitch, which will cause an identity crisis/
" ^^^ "Look, you and your city don't even match the size of my dick/
So how the fuck could you add up to the size of the lyrics I spit/
Aight this was a personal/punch attempt..keep wokin on it...Your a simple cat with no momorails/
You couldn't teenage spit if Lil' Bow' Wow' gave you a tutorial/
O k punch but elementary...
My quick-to-write skills are the rarest/
But when you try to text write, even the computer is embarrassed/
aight its a pretty good closer i liked the 2nd line of it.....

Not bad just keep on elevatin kiddd...............

aight chopper...ima do an overall judgement on yours cause you style was goofy lol.......
Aight chopper you threw a few punches that hit... no personals i saw...... aight your style needs mad work its too sloppy try a diff approach at the structure and your flow will be better....... that style seems newbish...
ok overall vote is Oc6 :thumbup:

K
 

Alright, thanks for the vote and input on the battle. Still UPPIN^^^^^^^^

lol man... return the favor.. check out my battle against phat mic... i voted in the poll btw, sorry for forgetting the first time.

ite like this

the oc had some nice punchz personalz where not really that great had good wordplay and some multiz to
favortie linez
Your a simple cat with no momorails/
You couldn't teenage spit if Lil' Bow' Wow' gave you a tutorial/

choppa u had about the same punch linez az everyone else just different worded mike jackson jokez been old since 97 get creative brah

vote/oc

I returned the favor shadow, even though my vote does not count for your battle because I do not have 50 posts yet. I did give my vote and input though. Thanks for the vote peoplez.^^^^^

Yo check da break down

Choppa City nice punches but verse hard to follow with your hillbilly ass structre damn on that note it makes your verse hard as hell to flow together so shit that prolly rhymed and flowed to you seemed completely irrelevant to me .... 6/10

Oc6..tight verse your punches came kinda hard some verses were basicallly fillers or had no meening but most of the bars were pretty good
our facing me, not knowing what the definition of nice is/
After this battle, your gonna get made a bitch, which will cause an identity crisis/
^^^that bar was aight, nice multi verse came strong nice punch....7/10

overall this vote is on who flowed and kept up the pace so my vote goes to

Oc6 Da Caustic...

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Good lookin' Acc. Make sure to put your vote up on the poll at the top of the thread. I'll return my favor with an honest vote on your current battle.^^^^^^^^^

Alright. Thanks for the votes, Keep em' comming^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Come on people, let's close this thread out! Vote, I'll return!^^^^^^^^^^^