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Mc Wars Part 1
"alright men, youre about to experience something you never have before/
keep your pads, pens and mics close, were almost at the war"/ said the sarge, our boat was rocking, the land was drawing nearer/ so fired up to beat the east, almost at the beach, but still we feared 'em/ course no one showed it, but the fear deepened when we began to hear 'em/ many mcs in the distance, rhyming, the soldiers closest to them were screaming/ "AHH its ear piercing" the war was beginning and it was going to be rough/ "shit, almost there, plug in your mics," the sarge ordered "and put on your ear muffs/ "sir, my systems fucked" said the private sitting next to me/ his backpack speaker had been hit by the oppositions mic check debris/ the seargent just told him to "hide?"... we knew he was going to die/ so did he... he turned his head, looked at me and started to cry/ the other guys did as told, bold and brave we sat waiting for this shit-to-start/ we were arriving at the battlefield... a beach that resembled omaha/ our Vehicles hit the shoreline the front door opened and everyone jumped off/ we took cover in a hole where an explosive punch was dropped/ then we stopped.. i was told to scope what was happening behind enemy "lines"/ lyrics everywhere, then i saw 2 men blown sky high by "pre-writ" mines/ WHY did i have to be in the "elevated front line," we're always the first gone/ skilled and elite but down under were all just pawns/ whatever... time to infiltrate, i approached the building but, camped, they had us at bay/ swiftly i pulled the pin and threw in a phat bass grenade/ the ground shook and swayed... then we moved into position/ climbing the lookout tower to take out mcs with good precision/ there they were, spittin hits that dont miss, and with the help of some other writers/ i pushed em off the edge into a pit full of prisoners of war.. AKA the biters... Part 2 coming soon.... or when i can be fucked..lol any feedback???? peace |
like the idea, worked quite well
noticed gaps in the flo but overall i liked it good luck |
yeah those gaps are fuckers now i read it again... oh well
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bump
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i need some more feedback... to elevate?
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it was tight could do a little better no disrespect
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step your game up just alittle i see some hot rhymes from you in the future homie HOLLA
oh yeah read my post |
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