accomplishment versus mcnotorious
 

yo check dis
5bars
no d.r. hate votes
no biting feeding or recycling
you droppin first or drop 25 min after checkin
yo check what

what you wanna do, is go and cower away//
until you get caught up in my lyrical sound display//
when i hear the sound, of your high pitched cry//
ill beat you down into the ground, waist high//
break ya back on this, lyrical attack//
your rhymes alone, are almost all wack//
and this time, you wont have the strength to run home//
ill fire a homing missile, with a tephon coat//
my destructive payload, reload the weapon//
fire in the dark, to keep you guessin//
come with those flows, and youll get shot//
your blood wont clot, your flesh will rot//
you got what you deserve, thats part of my plot//
i dare you to bite a rhyme, that is tighter//
your words are weightless, you aint a real writer//
how should i plead, in the court of law//
not quilty your honor, im fuckin raw//
ill cut you with a chinsaw, to make you withdraw//
sit back in awe, as i break your jaw//
my lyrical vows, will never supside//
when jesus walked on water, i beat him to the other side//








dunka dunk :shoot:

yo homme tight verse i gotta roll i'll drop tonight prolly aight

iight fine wid me son i prob wont check till tomarro then but ya fine wid me

AAAAAAAHHHHHH..Whatch Out....


Yo my lyrical tatics is 'massive', despite what ya rap is, i'm holdin it captive...
I'ma savage,ya skills are in jepordary, cuz ya "status" on dis site will become "in-active"...

Bitch gay, his nickname "seven-eleven" cuz when it comes to suckin dick he prefers a "Big GUlp"
and when it come to battlin i'm less than dis-respectfull..../

Fuck what dis fag-had, his rhymes like "bag-dad", constantly gettin "bombed on"...
ya shits dragged-on put ya rhyme book to some use, whipe up yo blood like tampons.../

Notta racist that shits not right, verses spit by whitefolks are ocassionally tight...
but here let me shed some light, i bet coke-heads have seen lines less white.../

But wait i'ma cracker to, shit thats ok i got no room to talk...
but damn kid yo rhymes endin up three shades lighter than chalk.../

HOld up fag just stay sweet, do what you do continue to beatin gays meat...
bitch dont realize he couldnt become famous if he spit to Dre's Beet....

CLASS SIC.......ACCOMPLISHMENT.....STOMPIN YA'LL OUT.....

uuuuuuuuuuupppppppin buckle your velcro fool

Yo...this shit was onsided...

MC...yoru verse was a'ight, but I wasn't really feeilin' ya punches....some I were near the begginin', but it went downhill from there...flow was good, structure was intact...elevate dawg...

5/10

Accomplishment...you could have spit much better, but your opener was dope...I have seen better from you, but your punches hit harder in this battle by far...flow was good, structure was good too...nice...

7/10

Vote- Accomplishment

Yo, hit this up...thx...

this shit was defintely one sided... pretty good spit for a newb mcnotorious, you got your flow pretty nice, no horrible problems there. your punches, i see you aiming for them but you gotta get some originality too it.. make it your own like acc:

"Fuck what dis fag-had, his rhymes like "bag-dad", constantly gettin "bombed on"..."

which is nicer, has some nice mutlis and everything.

mcnotorious, work on multis, worldplay, metas and basically your punches will become better for the most part...

return the favor... close that battle against phat especially.. i needs a "w"

Like Shadow Said This Battle Was One Sided.Accom Takes This One.He Had A Tight Opening Disses With A Good Follow Up.He Had Some Nice Metas But Some Could Use Work.His Puns Were Strong & His Disses Were Good Too.Some Of His Lines Were A Little Weak & His Ending Was Good.Notorious' Flow Was A Little Choppy Especially With All Those Commas.(You Shouldnt Use Them So Much Because They Break Up Your Sentences.Only Use Then Were You Want To Show Two Seperate Subjects)Some Of His Bars Didnt Rhyme Very Well Or Have Good Transition.He Didnt Have Many Strong Punches And His Complexity & Bar Structure Was Off.

Nice Battle Tho.Jus Elevate Like The Rest Of Us

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Return The Favor:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118687

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my vote:
 

Here we go:

Acc- I liked your opening a lot, you had a nice selection of words which flowed nicely together. Your structure was stong also, you had lots of vocab. which fitted together good. You were all about punches this time and you did them well, they were hard hitting and constant, keeping up with the pace. Some good personly's too, nice flow. I would of just done one bar with the white joke, but you worked it out. Good Flow.

McN- Your structure was a little weak and your flow was very average and basic. Be personal, don't have so much "I's" and "You's", get hit where it hurts, just don't put battle rhymes out there that just bounce off him. Expand your vocab a little more, too many easy words and rhymes, I know you can do better then this. Your flow was aight, but Acc took this one.

Vote: Acc, good battle!

Mc-well In These Words You Iight For A Newbie Playa...ya Structure Is Nice...ya Got A Good Rhyme Scheme Goin Also.now U Should Work On Bigger Words And Sum Good Punchlines And U'll Be Skr8.

Acc-u Got Good Potential Son....structure Is G'hood...rhyme Scheme Is On Point...punches Is Heavey...this Da First Battle I Peep'd Of Yours And I Like It.you Couldv'e Hit Em Even Harder Wit More Punches And Just Whip'd Em Out...but He A Newbie Like Myself So I Feel Ya.

S0 Imma Break It Down Like This Hea Playa'z
Punches:acc
Flow:acc
Creativity:acc
Multi'z:acc
Structure:tie
Overall Vote:acc

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