Mike12Ikeda vs. Diablo-Vice
 

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Words cum out of my so much, you thought I jizzed-a-breath//
I'm an ascension right after Queen Eliz-a-beth//
Our wits-are-test, its a no brainer who spit-the-best//
This is a battle, not to see who took a shit-the-best//
You swept off your feet like Chris Bosh-in-kicks//
I toast emcees like Jews in Aush-a-witz//
This is not a punk concert, but you get moshed-in-pits//
You wouldn't have anything cumming outta ya lips even if you masturbated
You must the Hamas leader on the mic cause you get lyrically-assassinated
Beating me is one impossible mission that Tom Cruise couldn't even con-quer
You must be David cause I'll goliathlly stomp ya

you think you got bling bling but ill tell you its fake metal/
now see im speeding by u while ur ass is riding the brake pedal/
you try to hard to use multis so face it/
your still an ameture so stick to the basics/
what the fuck kinda name is mike12ikeda/
sounds like some shit a bum bought from ikea/
your lyrics are horrid there a complete failure/
your rymes are rusty and so is your trailer/
so ill finish this ryhme and ill do it in style/
your just another victom on my win list file/

hmm wow interesting battle

who eva mike12ikeda is he came hard with the punches...structure flowed real well....no multies....but his punches flowed much better

Vice-man u need 2 up ur vocab....ur punches are still rusty u need 2 hit it harder....i like the process of u tryin tho....structure was the only thing i thought was good...u had no multies either....ur best line was this "what the fuck kinda name is mike12ikeda/
sounds like some shit a bum bought from ikea" if u were battling anyone they would eat that up....u have 2 step up everything u do from here on out....

vote goes 2 mike12ikeda harsh punches....

vice...you had good punches...but you DO need to open up your vocabulary...i think thats what sperated this battle...you both had good punches..not really any multies...decent imagery...decent structure...vice you didn't reallyt have any good metaphors....and ikeda did...so...my vote goes to ikeda...sorry vice...just elevatre a bit more

Ok we'll this was not that much of a great battle

Mike - structure was ok, punchs ok had a played punch and I'lls how u it. Vocab was good wordplay was good nothing really amazed me ur punchs where creative tho enough to get them hitting at a decent rate.

ur played punch/s:
This is not a punk concert, but you get moshed-in-pits

^^every1 knows the mosh pits lines are all played

You wouldn't have anything cumming outta ya lips even if you masturbated
You must the Hamas leader on the mic cause you get lyrically-assassinated

^^altho u added some creativity to em all the cum stuff, and lyrically assassinated shit is all played

Beating me is one impossible mission that Tom Cruise couldn't even con-quer
You must be David cause I'll goliathlly stomp ya

^again another played punch why well by now most of us has heard something to o with david and goliath, and tom cruise, and mission impossible punchs have been played for ahwile now.

Kid step up in ur punchs add something hard hitting no1 has ever heard before. Structure was alright, but could improve. Do some hw on opponents, and gain the advantage with personals it's funny to hear them in battles, and most of the time they are BIG clinchers.

D-vice

ur punchs where weak. Vocab was childish. ur bettah then this I can see u hiding talent show it. ur not 14 are u? u know more then that incorperate w/e u can into a punch or a personal disses don't envolve using grade 3 words when every1 knows u can be creative with bigger words. The more meaning u bring to ur verse the better quality it is going to be, and thats all there is to it rap is all about the quality right now I don't see none in ur's

breakdown
creativity-mike (creative with punchs altho played)
wordplay-mike (d-vice's where alittle childish)
punchs-mike (altho played still enough to get my vote)
personals-neither
flow-d-vices

d-vice had better flow, but mikes punchs where harder, and more creative. Altho played abit they where still enough to get him the win both of u need to learn what a personal is.

vote-mike

that was quite a timid battle
both cud have used some more harder punches in there cuz they were both average
gud flow and structure 4 both cud use of vocabs
diablo had a gud spit goin but lost it at tha end
so i'm givin my vote to mike12ikeda

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I gotta give this to Mike for some better punches, both of you flowed pretty good and had some hard punches, but Mikes came out on top to be better overall, alright battle boys.

Vote - Mike

mike: i had to give it to you, you had a nice flow on this one. you lacked personals, i think i noticed one multi. but you came hard with the punches. what u need to work on is bring personal punches that relate to your opponent.

vice: kind of basic. flow u had flow. personals were there also. no multies. but the punches i jus wasnt feeling. your biggest issue was with the punches...come stronger with them and come better lyrically. okay.

v/mike