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shadows edge versus accomplishment
yo check five bars
ur droppin first i'll drop prolly within five min after u no biting feeding or recycling no d.r. hate votes check in |
aight so you not leaving? or should i drop like *right now*?
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ya just drop right now i'm typin some shit down on my wordpad so i'll just drop that right after urs aigh FIVE BARS...is dat cool
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yea sure.. sorry, checking.. ill drop right now ^^
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your verse was better before your writin begun
your rhymes outdone by vanilla ice rerun 8 times you rehearse your verse and still end in the hearse i spit first, so this battle like rags to riches in reverse each time I spit it straight up triple split your lip my verse rip your hip n leave your spine clipped kick this *ass* out of *classic*, leave it with the same empty clic as the sound of your whack crew firing guns with empty clip beat the herbs but always drop against an ill matic mc makes sense, can’t spell accomplishment without a-c-c* *for anyone here who doesn’t follow college basketball, the acc teams got far but ended up crushed by uconn (my bad for taking a while.. had to take a piss :laugh:) |
uppin for accomp... thought you were gonna post right after me... ^
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Thanks for the votes. Looks like i KO'd this one, peace.
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My bad wrong Thread. I'm voting for this battle soon. (I meant to put that post in my thread)
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Whoa...ACCOMPLISHMENT STOMPIN YA'LL OUT
Ya stepped to quick to get hurt, vets like me dispurse of da rest... I merk who is left, its likeya "heart is a magnet" the way theese "bullets" hitten ya "chest"... Ya verse is racket, get mad at it, stopped and leave ya body wrapped in plastic... ya oblivious fuck a casket, i leave ya body on ya front porch, inya easter basket.../ I spit madness, while you spit wack-son, last line you seein will be a flat one... catch some lead without ya vest-on, blame it ona "wardrobe mowfuntcion" like "janet jackson".../ Fag, verse isnt noticed if you typed in bold, cuz you puttin ya "hands" around "heads", aint mean you give "choke holds"... my freestyles is "ill" off da "dome", like i gotta "head cold".../ Licken ya wounds and talkin shit, avoiden my beatin Aint-helpin-it... cuz ya be seein I.C.U. more than the fucken Alphabet... Yo sorry i was to late man i was at my g-mas gettin my grub on CLASS SIC |
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Good battle...shadow had a good verse wit decent punches and solid wordplay I liked it son... you should have made it longer in my opinion though...shadow had good vocab, an structure...it flowed well as well
Accomplish you started out kinda slow but you finished hella strong son...you had good punches an you killed wit the wordplay son...your closer closed the deal son, your structure was a little off but your flow was ok an decent vocab...but when came down to it accomplish verse was just a little stronger Vote: Accomplish Holla back y'all http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118296 |
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VOTEs i mean ...................votes
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Upp yo uppp yo upppp
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tight battle
accomplishment had a tight ass battle verse good punchs and tight ass metaphors waz fealin a bunch of them and that shit flowed well together best lines Ya verse is racket, get mad at it, stopped and leave ya body wrapped in plastic... ya oblivious fuck a casket, i leave ya body on ya front porch, inya easter basket.../ shadows edge had a nice verse 2 was kinda shaky in parts but where it waz good made up had solid punchz and more and tight personals liked those best lines kick this *ass* out of *classic*, leave it with the same empty clic as the sound of your whack crew firing guns with empty clip vote accomplishment hit my shit up with an honest vote |
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