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Looch vs realistdoggy11
10-15 linez
no crew votes all i ask |
checkin in u do the same an ill spit
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yo im hear spit
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ok check it
u claim to be the realist but wont even shoot the breeze/ its like im allergic to bitches when u around i be ready to sneeze/ i just wanna hand u a beatin that last a century/ so bad that it be in russel simmonz next documentary/ make me go undefeated for a year like a 1972 dolphin/ like the first murder in a scary movie its about to begin/ they say a man is made by what he goes threw/ better hope its true after this u gonna have to rebuild from mildue/ and please dont make me paralel park my gun in your throat/ the visual of it make u change the picture like a remote/ leavin u on the curb wit your heart in your lap/ punchlinez left u speachless so i guess its a wrap/ |
ok here
E looch that was ok but me im untouchable/ im bout 2 eat u up like a mother fukin lunchable/ just promise me 1 thing, that u wont kill ur self after i click send/ cause wit a name like E looch i no u dont have friends/ lyin from the cealing dead and straped wit a note/ i made u suck my dick then i cut out ur throat/ while u were grovilin in pain i straped u wit a granade/ ur family didnt like u so when u died they had a parade/ ripin E looch is a uncontrollable addiction/ i'll nail u 2 a cross like jesuses crusafiction/ ur lines were predictable they messed wit my health/ i just ripped u so copy,print,and put it on ur shelf/ oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo |
i liked relistdoggys shit better u both had good flows but when it came to the punches i like doggys more, i liked both intros they was hot but for the rest doggy won it...1 return da favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118359
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
Flow: Both flowed about the same to me....so i'll say its tie in this department
Vocab: Both had punches....realists' hit a little harder though. Neither had many multis, if any at all Originality: Both original.... Structure: The structure was pretty equal....damn near the same Overall Vote: Realistdoggy11....Mainly because his punches were harder |
get some vet votes on this uppin
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realistdoggy11 had some hard punches and came strong...
E looch that was ok but me im untouchable/ im bout 2 eat u up like a mother fukin lunchable/ nice opener ^^^^^^^^ Elooch had some hard hits and everything but overall realistdoggy had the better structure and better overall flow... Vote: realistdoggy11 |
ok uppin for some people that arent 13 and know punchlines to vote
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No Bull-Shit' .. Both Verses Succked A$$' .. But Let Me Hit This Shit Up With An Honest Vote!!!
Check Doggy's Lines: E looch that was ok but me im untouchable/ im bout 2 eat u up like a mother fukin lunchable/ ^An Alright Punch & Very Nice Opener!!! 9/10 while u were grovilin in pain i straped u wit a granade/ ur family didnt like u so when u died they had a parade/ ^A Weak Punch' .. But An Alright Multie In There!!! Vote: Doggy' |
damn these people are idiots on this site shit should be called hip hop and r&b battles
looch had a gangsta ass verse doggy shit was garbage an he slightly fed off what looch did i ait even votin no mo just puttin in my 2 fuckin centz looch u go to a diferent board an that shit rip him an many wayz stay up |
just promise me 1 thing, that u wont kill ur self after i click send/
cause wit a name like E looch i no u dont have friends/ E looch that was ok but me im untouchable/ im bout 2 eat u up like a mother fukin lunchable/ ooooooo this 2 lines killed it. doggy had some nice punches and opener good verse yo 8/10 looch - iight verse. finisher was weak as shit tho your opener was you best line leavin u on the curb wit your heart in your lap/ punchlinez left u speachless so i guess its a wrap/ vote - doggy |
This was an alright battle I guess, gotta give it to doggy tho for a better flow and better punches. Work on your flow and rymes Looch and you will get better.. alright battle ... vote goes to dogg
return the fav - http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119115 |
they were both aight, but i gotta give it to elooch....his shit was more complex...he had rhymes that were funny...although both verses didn't flow that well....ya dig
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