Looch vs A.K.A.
 

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where is the freestyle??????????????????????????????

u coulda looked at my registered date an seen i wasnt a newb/
leave shit leakin out ya head like flat that cant be fixed by jiffy lube/
u must be aka or alias the bitch made cocksuckin coward/
askin to see my private partz like a gay version of howard/(stern) <get it
this like i mob meatin dog be queit while the don speakin/
or ya freakin head will look like the mississippi leakin/
leavin u brain dead wit blank stare like u in a trance/
pistol in my pantz watchin this gay niggaz av breakdance/
punchlinez rushin u so hard u left wit a concushun/
u only 14 wha ya mom gonna do when she see u on here cussin/
so fuck u youngsta i consider u lame/
like a vegas tiger bitch i consider u taim/
but if u wanna flip ill put 4 threw u wit no hesitation/
so give up rap go get a minumum wage accupation/
even if i gave u a mac 10 u couldnt get in the gangsta nation/< get it

yo you only got ten posts so i got the rite to call you a newb//
your style is harder to figue out than a rubics cube//
i'm surprised that you new how to set up this battle//
don't even try, you ain't using a mic you using a rattle//
oh no i cuss go and tattle//
but i think that you should be aware//
cause my punches will make you piss you girly uderware//
you should a newb that you cant even set up avatar//
sorry kid but you got to rise abone the bar//
i'm spitting you out like you were tar//
you dissed my name what with e looch//
sorry pussy ass newb your still a pooch//
and i got to say your style is lame and i think i'll take you out the game//
i just reach in and take the ak out of my name//

lol damn u str8 feed off my verse but shit uppin for votes

i did with what two bar come on now what ever uppin for votes. plus your ass when off of my shit like name avatar and shit what with that.

oh man aka schooled u u guys both were straight though.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

^^ wtf hell naw kinda vote is that

uppin this shit ill return the favor

no if you vot like that then that a dickridin vote not allowed

breakdown for Looch:

flow: alittle choppy in spots but for the most part alright 6/10

volcab:good use better then average 7/10

punches:my fav,"askin to see my private partz like a gay version of howard" most of them were alright some played topics and alittle too much talking about your self 6/10

overall:19/30 pretty good verse

breakdown for A.K.A.

flow:striaght forward basic but it worked i guess 6/10

volcab:pretty basic could use some work here 5/10

punches:nice punches mostly played ideas but i still laughed at most of them my fav. "your style is harder to figue out than a rubics cube//" nice personal 7/10

overall:18/30

vote--looch edged this out it was close though

fool u and streetsweeepa voted for each other u bot dickriderz
and return the favor meanz ill vote o nthe fucki nbattle u nerd not im automatically votin for them

i think aka won because he had better punchlines and better flow this time i give it to aka


Still inadequately explained
-Cprogress

Lol im sick of seein these whack ass voters in every post.....anyways

This battle was whack! Nuffin made me say "Damn!" But honestly,E gets my vote.So heres my explanation.
Punches:E
Vocab:E...lol even tho u misspelled a couple words but i knew what u was tryna say.
Creativity:E..his shyt was just better by long
Structure:Tie...Yal both had ya barz typed where i kan read good
Flow:E...shyt stayed on track da whole time..AkA u fell off a couple times
Opener:Aka...the rubics cube line was good
Closer:E..."so give up rap go get a minumum wage accupation/
even if i gave u a mac 10 u couldnt get in the gangsta nation/"...dat was da best line in this battle
Overall Vote: E Looch!

uppin this shit