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ChYld 04-11-04 11:56 PM

ChYld VS Sharkk
 
10linez
No d/r votes or crew votes
Sharkk, you spit first
first to 5 votes, go

ChYld 04-12-04 12:04 AM

You spit first Sharkk, I'll spit right after you. Go.

Sharkk 04-12-04 12:06 AM

My verse (real Quick):

You and me, like a child and a “pet-a-file”/
I “stroke the facts”, then burn your style/
Young and irrelevant, I blast bars constant/
And my content, leaves this kid obnoxious/
Not worth my 2 cents, U incompetent/
Its common “cents”, that your skills spent/
I’m an obstacle, that leaves your pride comical/
Laughs aside you’re miserable, I missed your flow/
Young minded cause your mind ain’t advanced/
Battle me after pasting puberty, then you got a chance/

Yo, don;t play off my verse, and hit this back!!
/1

Sharkk 04-12-04 12:29 AM

Yo, i said i quick battle, i toke 10 mins, you posting soon!!

/1

ChYld 04-12-04 12:33 AM

You're not Great,dawg, but you're prob White, Sharkk/
You're also the type of fake MC who would hide mumble a bunch of shit then hide int he dark/

Yeah my name is ChYld- cried durin the Green Mile/
but i made ya momma cry when she dug up your grave makin so many dirt piles/

Shark no crew votes/
But you probably have ur whole family signed up just to make sure you dont choke/

So many people want to see ya succeed/
But that wont happen, when im leavin you there to bleed/

I am a young real MC that you havent yet seen/
But please kno that you just got beat by a kid who's only 14/

ChYld 04-13-04 02:03 AM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin on votes dawgs lets do this shit

ChYld 04-13-04 09:52 PM

Honest votes.......Uppin Lets do this^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

GKillaz05 04-13-04 09:57 PM

I didnt like shark's flow and short lines so I will have to give this to child, both had some good punches.. but child's flowed better and had better structure. childs good punch was I am a young real MC that you havent yet seen/
But please kno that you just got beat by a kid who's only 14/ nice finish bud. Shark work on increasin your lines and work on your flow and you will be sick.

Vote - Child

Return the fav wit my battle wit the whackass ghost.. thxhttp://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118397

ChYld 04-13-04 11:12 PM

Yeah, that's how i be doin it........Be honest Uppin on Votes^^^^^^^^^^^^

Inception 04-13-04 11:19 PM

ill say u both evenly matched just leave it at that

shark had a good flow better vocab had a good opener and closer and metaphorz bout it
best linez
Young minded cause your mind ain’t advanced/
Battle me after pasting puberty, then you got a chance/

chyld didnt see much u had some punchz but they werent that strong and didnt see to much of anythang need to work on makin ur linez evenly stretched just work on that
bestlinez
Shark no crew votes/
But you probably have ur whole family signed up just to make sure you dont choke/

vote shark but not by much

return the vote and hit up my shit

Nephew J 04-14-04 12:03 AM

aight, drop this here real, child ya fuckin structure sucks more dick than you dude

best line by child(best structured an flo'in-ess):
I am a young real MC that you havent yet seen/
But please kno that you just got beat by a kid who's only 14/

Ill(whole verse was though):
Young minded cause your mind ain’t advanced/
Battle me after pasting puberty, then you got a chance/

this is straight, Sharkk had damn good vocab, great struc and meta's

V/Sharkk,,,not hatin' on ya child

hotrod2k4 04-26-04 06:27 PM

this one goes to shark, chyld's rythm's didn't flow very easily

ghetto cripple 04-27-04 04:51 PM

chylds did rhym it just depends on how you rhyme it and that shows skill but im'a have to go with shark on this one just cause he had the same thing goin so that evened it out but then he had harder punches, i vote shark

vote on my battles, keep in mind i didnt go hard on the dawgfather i went more for flow so keep an opened mind,

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120936

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120927

NeXion 04-30-04 04:52 PM

Ight i think Shark's was short but he came harder and Chyld had some odd lines but heres my my V/Shark

Shark: 7/10
Chyld: 5/10

return Honost votes plz on sig :)

Willa 05-01-04 04:48 PM

Shark: 6.5/10
Chyld: 4/10
not very good from either
chyld work on vocab creativity and structure
shark work on multis and flow stuck a lil
vote shark


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