violation-to-va vs :Krysis:
 

10-5 linz
no d/r
no crew hate votes :banghead:
an no bullshyte :headbang:

violation-to-va = young-blake. Both banned for cheating
-Cprogress

seen as i aint got a crew the rules r all good to me...

Checkin in....:spit: ya shit blud...

shyte i gotta squad jam member squad nigga so i represent make sur you just have ur battle

linez due by 12:45 pm tday so i think u betta be typin

dont worry about me, what time zone u in yo cuz im in the uk an its 5:30 pm here.....................................

itte but it gotta be hurr no lata than 6:30 on yurr tyme

Check....

Yo take ya time VA, dont need no haste ,cuz from 1 punchline Krysis'll smack the taste right out ya face-
this aint no race, cuz i already dropped the finish line an i aint even started to ryme-
see u in Violation of litteration writin weak skripts wit no communication or creation-
shit i'd get more of a contest from parrapa the rappa on playstation-
you should be called 'violet' the way u get beat blue n purple-
i dont meen to get personal but ure rap persona's really self hurtfull-
see u violatin ya rights cuz this is rapbattles.com n u aint even an emcee-
u could morph into cannabis n still not rise to levels higher than me-
see you couldnt drop knowlage if u threw encyclopedeas offa plain-
acceptin battles when u know ure wack FACTIONAL i think u need to get ya brain reframed-
see bein shamed aint good an how the fukk u from tha hood?-
timbaland shows VA got PLAYAZ but u gettin PLAYED good-

lol.......

keystyled.........

yo its 6:13pm u better hurry up if the deadlines 6:30....and why r u waitin for me to post? u gonna feed off me?

nice that was hot an clear but come closer so u can hear\\
:krysis: imma bout to emcee chu ,prolly can't read what i just said\\
take me 4 granted im not a coward ,its all n-yah head\\leavin tha cluess sick and sum dead,\\i cunsum lil light weights like chu\\
i spit da bones out,then i start to chew\\
this is no question imma mence\\i should floss my teeth of the skin an rinse\\
my character is slick imma well known thef\\
take ya sole then i left\\
im not so dum as u kno\\
but in ur case imma play stupid cause u will neva be found again "o"\\
see we much different im ova da fine line\\
a well u wastin yah tyme\\im tha nxt best thing looking to foward to blow up\\
my lyrics rhymes to yah bytch ass is like special playing true crimes\\
we gonna 4get dis eva happen just ball it up\\
hurry up an bite short stuff\\this is really not the end\\nxt tyme we battle imma let chu begin\\so this really a confession\\
ahah tha last tyme u battle wit me imma sit cha down an start blessin\\
cause god it what chu need in ur tyme of life\\
pray now 4 dre be up yah crib wit a death list \\
:laugh2: :shoot:



jms representa

itte dat was sick watchu wrote i do need to up my game

Flow:No contest, Krysis...It was pretty smooth. Va I couldnt really feel your flow maybe it was the "chu" that kept throwing it off for me

Structure: Krysis, was easier to read the way it was structured. Va the '//' on the same line was not working. It made it all hard to read, maybe thats what hurt the flow

Vocab: Krysis vocab was better also. Krysis punches were better, especially this line "see you couldnt drop knowlage if u threw encyclopedeas offa plain-
acceptin battles when u know ure wack FACTIONAL i think u need to get ya brain reframed-"

Vote: Krysis

i wasnt feelin eitha verse like talkin bout but it was a ok battle
krysis
punches-6/10
vocab-7/10
structure-8/10
flow-6/10
start-6/10
closing-7/10
overall-6/10

va
punches-7/10
vocab-6/10
structure-7/10
flow-6/10
start-67/10
closing-7/10
overall-7/10

come on peep upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 dem votes

come on just 4mo vote

need sum votes hurr