MisterE21 vs. guyver4mk
 

A'ight, check in, then I'll spit first...

No less than 10 lines, no more than 25, a'ight?

All the standard shit applies...

Read it, critique it, vote it...

E

Checkin in. Spit ya shit an PM me when ur done an I'll spit.
holla back

Think carefully, homie, you get no do-over this time,
Flip a coin and decide, do you bite Em or Pac's lines?
Your bitin' someone, cuz your own rhymestyle got no endurance,
After this you're fucked like a 6 year old with AIDs and no insurance,
The only claps you get are when your tiny dick's burnin',
Now you know you're losin', you're uncomfortable, you're squirmin',
Never should've signed on to rhyme this time cuz you're mine,
After I flip ya, I'd take a picture, but child pornography is a crime,
You talk way too much shit, when you know you can't back it,
The only time you spit real shit is when your sick, coughin' and hackin',
So do us all a favor, sit the fuck down and strop trying to rap,
Cuz you been sent back, packin, like you're full of books and have straps...

E

Okay, this may sound lame and retarded/
You musta jus crept outa CounTree's ass cos he farted/
I don't bite rhymes like a little nigga, I write 'em bitter/
So what if I used the beat from Hit 'em up and quitter/
How the fuck does that make me a biter you jus a cypher/
Try to hate on me cos u read one of my verses in front lines/
Whipe the white from ya lips an get your nickle or dime/
cos u caught syphilis & Cystitis from dick ridin people's rhymes/
You nothin to me, but a wannabe 'g' and I say that shit freely/
Cos I've won this battle, and the end sees u 6ft underneath me/

Vote yall. I'm uppin in herre.

Holla Back People!

god damn....Never should've signed on to rhyme this time cuz you're mine,
After I flip ya, I'd take a picture, but child pornography is a crime...thats all she wrote...show's over...too bad i can't use that for a vote...

alright...E....most of it was pretty solid....good punches...strong punches..punch..after punch..this is like oscar delahoya vs. some kid with downs syndrome...
So do us all a favor, sit the fuck down and strop trying to rap,
Cuz you been sent back, packin, like you're full of books and have straps

that was your worst line...i wasn't feelin it too much at all...maybe it's just how i read it...now onto you guy'


where the hell do i begin

oh...lets try here....Okay, this may sound lame and retarded/
You musta jus crept outa CounTree's ass cos he farted.....seriously...thats weak...no disrespect.....but you didn't bring your A game...as a matter of fact...you didn't bring any game at all...i don't wanna piss you off....but you need somethin to build off of...your punches were weak...no personals...no metas...nothin...your verse woulda been better if you said "i lose" and thats it.....anyways..good battle....????

guyver i wanna battle you...i'll set up....you can go first...

Vocab:MisterE
Flow:Tie
Structure:Tie
Creativity:MisterE
Opener:MisterE
Closer:MisterE

This battle was iight....couldve been better if ya actually took time to write sumden dat made sense ya know?

what the hell...ok both elevation on both...but its coo still...anyways heres the thiing...

Flow...Both...no work needed
Punches....More from mister....hardly those that were grea...guy just repeated a punch thats alll....defending for your biting or shit in two lines gets annoying...say something new..

Personals....bla fuck that...
multis...none to see here...
overall=Mister...BARELY though...Im not a textee but i know what im talking about here...ok done..

hit up my audio battle please..

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119124

aight...i'll vote on this if you guys vote on mine

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119158

yo this was a pretty one sided battle....

mr e took everything

flow
direction
humor
creativity
this kid verse was sick from the start

Think carefully, homie, you get no do-over this time,
Flip a coin and decide, do you bite Em or Pac's lines?
straight till the end

You talk way too much shit, when you know you can't back it,
The only time you spit real shit is when your sick, coughin' and hackin',
vote mr e

THIS BATTLE WAS DOMINATED BY MISTER.....
guyver4mk...YOUR FLOW IS VERY BASIC......
HERE'S THE BREAK DOWN
FLOW-MISTER..GUYVER....YO SHIT IS ANNOYING ...KEEP IT REAL...
PERSONALS-MISTER
STRUCTURE-BOTH NEED TO WORK ON WRITING BARS....