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G Deuce 04-12-04 09:01 PM

Madd Hatter vs G Deuce
 
rules:
no d/r votes
no hater votes
no feeding
10-15 lines

MH spits first

check in

G Deuce 04-12-04 09:30 PM

checkity, checkity, checky, check check!.................

Inception 04-12-04 09:32 PM

checkin in

G Deuce 04-13-04 01:24 PM

Wrong place, Ghost, I'm battling Madd Hatter...............You still need to check in man

MADD HAtter81 04-13-04 04:02 PM

ight im herre im herre calm down dont get ya panties in a bunch

imma come out this fuckin corner swingin/
you got one second to live you can hear the angles singin

shoot up ya house smash the family picture/
a shot bounces and suddenly hits ya/
goes into you like it was made to fit ya/
live life good cuz you have no future

you say you a gansta g duce cant shoot/
take ya loot like a fuckin jumped prostitue

imma teach you a lesson so sit and learn/
my rhyms so hot leave you wit third degree burns

you anit nutin but a dude witta clit/
and you aint shit wit out the mutha fuckin R.I.P/
now the chryme sindacate runs this bitch/
go ahead and post cuz im finished

G Deuce 04-13-04 08:55 PM

Here you go playa, sorry I had to do this...

Game Ruling, I’m pulling “MADD” rhymes out my “HAT”
Yous a wansta, copy and pasting lines for a rap.
It’s a rap, cause this fakeass MC needs to take off his wig
I’ll Make his losing streak almost as big as this nigga’s sig (Damn)
Added a “d” to add flare to his name, That’s pimp Playa (sarcastic)
You miss spelled the rest too, it supposed to be “Mad Hater”
I blow off hips, and sneak in why you searching for hide out
I closed the R.I.P. cause this nigga wanted to post his tryout. (Ouch)
He uses cuss words to help fill in gaps in his prewrites
I’ll K.O. his bitch ass, while he looking for “stars” and strips.

G Deuce 04-13-04 08:56 PM

uppin for mutha fucking votes ya heard...................................

Inception 04-13-04 09:02 PM

lol shit deuce got this one had a better opener and continued wit solid punchz and personalz all threw the verse and it flowed pretty well together
best linez
I blow off hips, and sneak in why you searching for hide out
I closed the R.I.P. cause this nigga wanted to post his tryout. (Ouch)

hatter had an ite opener a few punchz werent that hard though a couple of personalz that werent that strong either but it flowed pretty well
best linez
imma come out this fuckin corner swingin/
you got one second to live you can hear the angles singin

vote/deuce deuce

hit this up been open way 2 long

ghostvs gkillaz

G Deuce 04-13-04 09:04 PM

right on playa, uppin for more mutha fucking votes.......................

G Deuce 04-14-04 09:49 AM

uppin for votes niggas..............................seriously..... ...

CounTREE Jay 04-14-04 10:09 AM

G:Deuce took this shit.

He took

opener

closer

Flow

Punches

Personals

It’s a rap, cause this fakeass MC needs to take off his wig
I’ll Make his losing streak almost as big as this nigga’s sig (Damn)

that shit was sick. He was on another level. He took it to you. Some spots yo shit didn't rhyme. Just elevate a bit homie.

vote, G:Deuce

Enygma 04-14-04 10:33 AM

imma come out this fuckin corner swingin/
you got one second to live you can hear the angles singin
Ehh... not a good opener
shoot up ya house smash the family picture/
a shot bounces and suddenly hits ya/
goes into you like it was made to fit ya/
live life good cuz you have no future
last line didn't rhyme...
you say you a gansta g duce cant shoot/
take ya loot like a fuckin jumped prostitue
Boring...
imma teach you a lesson so sit and learn/
my rhyms so hot leave you wit third degree burns
Played....
you anit nutin but a dude witta clit/
and you aint shit wit out the mutha fuckin R.I.P/
now the chryme sindacate runs this bitch/
go ahead and post cuz im finished
I know we run this bitch....lol...... not a good closer though


Game Ruling, I’m pulling “MADD” rhymes out my “HAT”
Yous a wansta, copy and pasting lines for a rap.
Not a bad personal...
It’s a rap, cause this fakeass MC needs to take off his wig
I’ll Make his losing streak almost as big as this nigga’s sig (Damn)
LMFAO.......... that was some funny shit
Added a “d” to add flare to his name, That’s pimp Playa (sarcastic)
You miss spelled the rest too, it supposed to be “Mad Hater”
Good personal....
I blow off hips, and sneak in why you searching for hide out
I closed the R.I.P. cause this nigga wanted to post his tryout. (Ouch)
Good punch........ kinda feedin
He uses cuss words to help fill in gaps in his prewrites
I’ll K.O. his bitch ass, while he looking for “stars” and strips.
Not really a good closer.....


Overall this was an unfair battle. G Duece clearly has more experience and it showed. Madd Hatter just needs to work on personalizing his battle. G could use some more wordplay but what he had hit hard as shit. that's why I gotta vote for him.

Vote - G Duece

G Deuce 04-14-04 12:02 PM

ight, that's cool. Uppin for more votes ya heard.........

G Deuce 04-14-04 02:48 PM

uppin for more votes for this....................................uppin for votes

G Deuce 04-14-04 08:36 PM

can I get some more votes here, uppin for some more please.............


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