J vs tha hoe va
 

aight lines as go check an then well drop blind

lol tite tittle

yurrrrrrrrr checkinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

itte u spit 1st i neva spit 1st............................................

motha fucka, it is blind, we spit at tha same motha fuckin time homie,,,,,checkin in

aight violation to va, this-a go this way wit J/
ya incinaration to play this day out is ya gay//
ya from bedrock, I got ya old ass on lock/
tha lyrical glock gettin ya for suckin cock//
I'ma Lyrical Crook, ya look at tha sig, ya get shook/
I'll book ya up past tha I.C.U., get ya a undergound nook//
ya lil 15 yr old dick-freestylin' faggit, I'ma gag ya ya maggit/
will I have to put 10 in while I beat tha fuck out this nimwit//
5th bar an I'm already tha star of tha battle, sit, I'ma assassin/
clashin wit ya, life flashes wit ya gashes you and ya dick-passion//
ya a lil hoe tryin ta be tha show while on a dick ya suck,cant grow/
got a 9mill to fill ya mouth, my dick say no to ya mouth to blow//
trick, sit ya Flintstone ass down wit a shattered glass frown, ya stained brown/
old mothafucka, i knock ya coffee on ya on ya, gimme my well deserved crown//
Get off ya comp, ya average 52.09ppd, oh me, ya a computer nerd ass geek/
I won this one fo sho, I got 52.09 Gs, moe dough than ya make in 104 weeks//

sucky an weak drop ya shit quick

iits like dat allot of da word dick in da shyte,to much 4 me to refrain yah gay bytch\\
i think u just lost yah crown to many dream an hopes im to shatter"em now\\
my 15-yrs could take u,it would be competiton ill lay down\\
im da king hurr taking ova tha game gaining my crown\\
violater u just been crushed im earnin a new name shyt i an't in no rush\\
i take u bak an show how we do in da south\\
let u sleep wit a purpose an let"chu wake up crushed\\
imma stop u right ,prolly can't comprehend wat i just flowed\\
well let me tell u clear,imma woop yah like da cops on a drug bust\\
no stick,no weapons just 2 fist u don't wanna fuck wit us\\
i came hurr tonite to explain to yah slow ass\\
since u wanna be a dummy ill have laying bout 6ft under da grass\\
:laugh2: :laugh2:
my maggitisum is good threw my spite\\
i eat lil chump ass rappers like u midnight snake all night\\
ok i just got flinestone ass up an got in yah face\\
i see u got" yah heat well bring it's "ok"
im bout to k.o\\my lyric flomatic but dey won't show\\
imma bout to be announced tha winner an imma tell u to sit\\
get bak up imma spitfire bak on yah ass,had enough\\
some tymes i gotta be cruel to talk rough\\
shyte betta quite go pack yah shyte an head home on da nxt groundhog bus\\

itts up 4 dem votessss

alright man..to tell you guys the truth..both of ya were equal..both of ya had same punch..no one had better ones...so I'll just go wit nephew J cuz he had just a few other rhymes that others don't use it..but wait, violation..ur sentence structure was bad also just ta let u know..but i know violation could do better..just didn't do good this time..alright...

hey..vote on mine plz...i want to get it over wit..

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119080

i jus wanna say this was a boring ass battle didnt wanna finish reading eitha verse but i did so check it
punches-netha
struture-j
vocab-va
flow-va
open-j
ending-va
overall-va barley

ummm, va ya dumbass, I stated 8 barz, and you had 10 barz, but up for votes, an va for your advice, learn to follow tha mothafuckin rules ya dumbass.....uppin for muh votes

ok but i was tha one who was suppose to start this man fuck u

because the structure an the detail how he described his word it was hott i was feeling it

uppin.........drop votez an a link if ya feel it..........up

Ya kno i think Va is right bout you be gay Neph, you talkin bout dick and what not
i guess ya like it, but anywayz none o ya'll had punches, struture-J
vocab-Va
flow-Va
open-J
ending-Va
not hate'n on ya Nephew
final=Va