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J vs another hoe named child
aight yo, 8 barz max, check in then we'll drop blind
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Never the one to start this heat//
But i am the one who makes ya feel like ya 6ft deep// You aint even worth a cent// Record labels didnt want to sign ya cuz all there money was spent// On ChYld- my 7digits they dialed- tellin me i can have all these money piles// look at you Nephew J// Ya only got 8 barz to say// Fuck that im gonna go on till i aint feelin it anymo'// This is called "another hoe named child"?// Dawg dont talk bout your girl who gave another man a child// You spelled it wrong anyway- look at my name mo' then once// After i beat ya, i own ya// Blow ya away wit some shells// Into a graveshift in hell// Diggin your own grave// Ingraved: here lyes the beatin Nephew J// this battle aint over// im just gonna make ya mo' colder// so cold not even the sun could make ya warmer// chills creepin up and down ya neck// you brought the real ChYld to a situation i couldnt neglect// Now you watch in suspense// to wonder where i could be// me and my homies from nothern cali will run up on ya like real G's// Dawg i'll make ya die like Juliet, stabbed wit a dagger// So nobody can no longer hear ur lame ass chitta chatta// You just talk no walk// blast ya wit my nine milimeter glok// shoot ya till ya drop// and leave ya there to die on the spot// you "Murder Inc" talent// just doin hooks with ballad's// pussy, written on how a 14 year old beat ya wit a god given name ChYld!!// ******************************* You just wet ya cheap ladies underwear// cuz im just tearin at ya like a Grizzlie bear// fuckn TRICK! Fuck you i aint givin ya no respect |
disqualify me pussy if you really that low
i said what the rest needed to kno Bitch!! |
Aight ya lil bitch, iz you one off my children?/
I spill in to feel in, billin' ya for tha ChYld killin'// Ya, I'm that much more real hoe, feed off this lead/ I make ya bleed like tha red on ya sig, small re-read// Murder Inc. fake like you I think, naw trick I know, I'm sure/ Listen to tha shit I implore, you bout to be dead on tha floor// A real G? You? Haha, you fuckin' lil stand-up comedian/ I run over tha median to get ya, play ya like an acordian// Bitch, I saw ya as a joke, I roll ya tight up and smoke ya like a blunt/ This isn't a hox,crush ya like coke,ya like a mothafuckin' football I punt// Ya small, so I ask myself, iz you a treat to me? Hell naw, ya'a lil punk kid/ I git rid of ya like I do my lil bro, ya know ya like a lil bitch I once rid// I ain't gotta spit ill in this, ya just weak, I seek ya wit a lyrical missile/ Ya gotta plastic pistol thinkin ya tha shit, streak ya ass wit a Bissle// Rip ya like fat-grissle, fuck my '8 barz', wit ya 18, I still got ya young un/ Ya just a lil dude bein rude not respectin ya elders, so I have fun pullin a gun// Dude, ya needa look at tha mothafuckin guide lines bitch,,,,drop ya votes here, honest Remember, there was supposed to be '8 barz' ChYld, or Child, dont make a fuck |
uppin on this fresh and so clean battle....uppin..
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Chyld your verse had alot of fillers and flow was off/u had some humorous thing/nice closer/bad opener/no multies/
Nephew yo shit was tight no lie u had multies more than enough puches to beat him and good flow v/Nephew J Vote on my battle Da Solution vs. Spitfire |
uppin on this here,...........drop votes an links if ya feel it...
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flow=J
Multi's=J punch=J overall=J J had better punch basicly..and chyld..ur freestyle was way to long..which made it way boring after a while..don't do that alot cuz it kills it...ur okay..but just didn't do good in here..good job vote= J |
Nah i think these guys are a lil buggin
i think it was a close one. Nephew i've read some other battles of yours and you complain bout the rules too much. but i agree that ChYld's verse was too long. i like his opener and endering out of the two. Nephew had pretty good flow but chyld held it up. structure i think CHyld had it just a lil long but good. and for some damn reason i thought nephew said no D/R votes,NoLost4Rhymes??? but anyway im gonna give this battle to ChYLD |
cold, no d/r was here, nolost had voted against me hoe but anyway.........uppin..........drop links if ya feel it
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up on this shit drop votes on these damn things...........an a link if ya feel it
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yo i gotta give this shit to Nephew J
rules are rules and if you break them it is could cheating and u dont deserve to win it was a tight battle anyway but the goin over the bar limit tipped it in J's favour Ya, I'm that much more real hoe, feed off this lead/ I make ya bleed like tha red on ya sig, small re-read i like that line, good use of sig just doin hooks with ballad's// pussy, written on how a 14 year old beat ya wit a god given name ChYld!!// child best line, nice finisher, inconsistant structure tho vote - NJ return with an honest votes - links in sig |
Uping for votes.......................................
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omg i think that fag nephew j might have actually won lol
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aight, upppin up on this script
drop them votes an' links an' I'll get back at ya HONESTLY |
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