chek it
 

Sometimes you, gotta chill out-gotta do wotcha do
it doesnt matter what uva people fucking make of you
You are wot u are and thats what u live for,
dont let no mother fuckers knock your head to the floor.

You dont need to come from the streets
to find your rhythms, find your beats
Just respect and accept stylish feats,
Coz you dont have to be a great mate, to appreciate,
the music they make with the time they take.

Respect it
Not for the colour of the skin,
but the subs and how they use it,
It wont always be there so 1 day their gonna lose it- so dont abuse it

im the s, c, o double t, white not black-dats me snoop and dizee,
im no skibadee, or another eminem wannabe,
I might not be as great as you will ever be,
but accept me for who i am, and dats- ME

Come from a good background,
might be different but create a good sound,
listened to your records-ive played and rewound
But all you do is brag and just share it all,
Dat ur from the streets in that box wit da aerial

FUK DAT-just sing for da rap,
Not ur fuking background and all ur crap
Bout ur family and u, and ur posse and ur crew

8 shots to the head-
Who gives a shit if ur lucky u aint dead,
shouldnt need to boast u got live fire in your post

I might not ever be as good as you will be, but accept me for who i am-and dats ME.
:thumbup:

hope this dont offend people, it aint designed for dat but feed back please, how can i improve, bearing in mind dat im only 14.

feedback?