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NoLost4Rhymes vs. VC
no d/r votes
15-25 lines max 3-0 equals KO 5 else wise . check in and then i will flow battle due by 3 p.m. votes due by friday. |
i'm not ready yet..i'm battlin like hella freaken ppl right now..i'll be ready in like 45 minutes
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okay i will be waiting im sittin here in TRIGONOMETRY BORED AS A BITCH RIGHT NOW.. LEARNING.(we get laptops the entire school does)
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dawg.......... I'm ready now alright...just spit first
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im at *no lost 4 rhymes* each time i slay mimes several ,in each one of my lines/
im in school,doin trig with signs like sine the way i mulltiply my lines i should divide by cosine/ im *blessed* with great words,sweet,sertainly absurd,i must be absolutely divine/(cookies) i'll rally bloods and crips niggas to Cali,get you merked in a back alley/ nimbus,bamboozled,get ya brain out the sky,cuz i might catch u cloudy/ it's obvious this nigga gettin dick multiple ways,u singin like ja rule...with no more rainy days/ i'll douse u in petroleum set your anatomy to blaze,have you engulfed in fiery haze/ just call me tourney man(tourneyment) cuz after a few rounds ,i get you eliminated/ like robert downy meets the twin towers,cant stand tall against me until u get rehabilitated/(drugs robert downy,twin towers were standing tall) im suffocate your rhyme deprive it of any life,it gets no ventilation/ ill circumcise ya *Clique* like afghani's ritual womens mutilation/ no hesistation,when i *cum* at you,like i was on pussy deprivation/(cum hard and alot) i'll beat rhymes head in, over and over again,like a preteen who recently discovered masturbation/ THERE'S NO NEGOTIATIONS,I STAY ONE-SIDED IN BATTLES,LIKE U WAS Iraq and I WAS UNITED NATIONS/ I *daily spit C,bally's for ya*,i'll get like magellan and travel all the way to *daly city,cali forn ia*/ (the ones in the starst in last bars rhymes) |
When i spit its no joke...this heat will leave vc broke dry and cracked with no flow//
and if i must say your entire style is incomplete like winter wear with no coat// I don't come close to losers, so I prefer you keep your distance// you need assistance, better start praying and hope that Jesus listens// Your so whack you ask dykes to sit on your lap// and you write as good as a broken typewriter used by a guy on crack// I dont give a fuck who votes, my words pierce through throats// I'll let you type three verse's and still take you out in two quotes// Facial hair? We all know thats something you wont be getting soon// So fuck a close shave cause the only thing im trimming down is your squads platoon// So, You think your rhymes is tight nigga Heck No, Loose It// Your Sounds is Repetitive Can somebody please rename this kid "Techno Music"// Your whack, Dont show me what this Hoar can do// Because I've seen uncle Festa blow up more than you// You - Whack - Fuck..open ya eyes and read the signs// This here is called Rap Search Please leave the site// Your going home injured, Whether Men will job ya twice.// Either by Smut Pedlars, Tame One, Cage, Or Copywrite!// Im the iLLest with Victims, I Use a Stopwatch And Guns// Get ta thinkin,while Danna screams at the top of his lungs/ Its your death, What ya wanna do? Choose To Run?// Yea, it's true, I have no lost for my ryhmes// cuz my rhymes come from my mind// Unlike this guy that gets his rhymes from a site and plagerize// |
lets get em votes in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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well my vote
punches: close close but it goes2: nolost flow: no lost VC you did good probably 7 out of ten u coukd dobetter no lost: probably 8.5 out of 10 you both could do better my vote nolost |
thanx dawg
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this was a really close one
i kno u both got more in u but my vote goes to nolost it was a really close one but i was feelin no lost n' his punchlines n' flow vote:nolost |
thanx dawg
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this was a good battle
flow:NoLost Punches:NoLost Structure:NoLost Originality:Vc Both overall good performances NoLost i give an 8 out of 10. Vc i give a 7 out of 10. Playas, vote on some of these battles so i can free up a spot franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374 franchiZe 0-1 Shadows edge http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290 franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293 franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 franchiZe 0-0 Ghost354 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335 |
yo hot shyt
VC dude u got lyrics( i heard from u b4), but i dont think battles are yur strong point. no lie i have the same problem making the adjustments b/c im truly a lyricist opposed to a battle, or gangsta emcee maybe try concentrating some of yur lines and to make them more compact to enhance the impact, and also consentrate on tur opponent more no lost u did yo thang a lil bit and i give u the win for yur consistent punchlines and similies. also structure and rhyme scheme were in tact fav line: "I don't come close to losers, so I prefer you keep your distance// you need assistance, better start praying and hope that Jesus listens//" |
i just need one more vote
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yea that was sum battle ...no lost ya punches where better than vc
they hit harder than dc also but ya both did good vc juss keep workin hard man u can get this shit v//no lost |
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