second 2 none
 

yo yo
im wn compared to me man u iz feminine
im tha next eminiem, no im betta then him
im tha next tupac shakur, no, i iz more
thtz right, hez the best rappa eva, well he waz
but im betta, all ma life ppl be puttin me down sayin,
no way neva
well im gonna prove dem all rong, n im gonna start by rappin thiz song
ye soon girl im gonna b sein ya thong, hittin u frm da bk wit my dingdong
yea im gonna be big, but every1 will envy me,
ill have bout 5000 wigz, just to get privacy
privacy frm ppl like u, c, u iz a wannabe
wannabe me a real g, like tupac n biggie
well they iz like me, cuz i iz second to none
i own the game n make tha fun, son

that waz second 2 none
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ne1 else

aight you must be a newbie so i'll give you some advice..first of all you need to spell your words correctly even the basic ones, you need to stay on your topic through out the verse, and you need to improve your vocabulary, you should get hooked on phonics or some shit to help your illiteracy cause your verse as a whole was 100% ignorant and uneducated..no disrespect but this was a terrible verse and if you take time to think about what your goin to write about you might see a significant difference..take my words into consideration and just improve and elevate..one