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spitfire-+ vs Oc6 The Caustic
no d/r vots
crewhate vots 10-25 linz no bullshyt |
an u go 1st
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Aight. I'll post within' 25 mins. Cool?
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yurr
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My Verse
Ok dawg. Here's my verse. (Done in 15-20 mins)
Battle with Oc6, leaving ya fucked up signing off ya disability check/ You couldn't spit fire if I put hot sauce on the mic and you swallowed it/ People say I'm too young for this game to be on top/ But you couldn't be more of a man even if ya balls dropped/ You burn the innocent? We'll I burn the fuckin' guilty/ And your guilty of losing this battle, voted by the Frontline Emcees/ Your a helpless row-boat getting sunk in my sick flow/ You'll get hit with a lyrical wave that will lay you next to the titanic victims down below/ The way your leading your un-organized style into war, you must be a chaotic chief/ But I'll lay your whole army of lyrics out as if i was a psychotic belief No one can handle my vocab., It'll have your brains stirred/ And I'll have ya running up and down helpless, just like ya avatar/ So the next time you see this face, remember who had you shook/ I usually like my fresh meat raw, but you have just been pre-cooked/ |
Hit it up my homie
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Come on man, you have been online for at least a half over. You had plenty of time,lets go
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It's been a whole HOUR! I smell pre-written........Spit your verse!
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itte hurr comes anotha one 4 tha kidds\\
imma bout to teach Oc6 The Caustic a lesson he will never 4get\\ lets blaze the field up an tie him up in it\\ yu"ll be burned up worser than ashes matta fact u won't be shyte\\ im tha king an u peasent of dis rap game\\ i won't stop at nuttin to finish u off,cut chu neck an rip out cha brain\\ im lyrical acclaimed to let tha innocent die\\ u will be my next victum i shread up, stabb u in da heart an tear out cha eyes\\ this isn't offical pain its just why u hurr so enjoy\\ i grabb u will u sleep drag u out side feedchu to my as if u were a chew toy\\ im real violent when i start my method of physical dismantle\\ want a demonstration come hurr bring legg imma gently rib it off by my manhandle\\ im quick to notice a victum of defeat\\ how u ask 1st i grabb u by there hand and chop off there feet\\ then i toss the remains into a selective ponds \\ you won't be found again till a legal statement in court an then sum agreeable bonds\\ |
itte hurr comes anotha one 4 tha kidds\\
imma bout to teach Oc6 The Caustic a lesson he will never 4get\\ lets blaze the field up an tie him up in it\\ yu"ll be burned up worser than ashes matta fact u won't be shyte\\ im tha king an u peasent of dis rap game\\ i won't stop at nuttin to finish u off,cut chu neck an rip out cha brain\\ im lyrical acclaimed to let tha innocent die\\ u will be my next victum i shread up, stabb u in da heart an tear out cha eyes\\ this isn't offical pain its just why u hurr so enjoy\\ i grabb u while u sleep drag u out side feedchu to dog my as if u were a chew toy\\ im real violent when i start my method of physical dismantle\\ want a demonstration come hurr bring legg imma gently rib it off by my manhandle\\ im quick to notice a victum of defeat\\ how u ask 1st i grabb u by there hand and chop off there feet\\ then i toss the remains into a selective ponds \\ you won't be found again till a legal statement in court an then sum agreeable bonds\\ |
uppin in dem votes
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Finally. UPPIN FOR VOTES^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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This was a good battle y'all both dropped some nice shit....Oc6 you had good punches, you flowed well, an you snuck in a few multies, no personals or wordplay but solid verse, liked it playa.
Spitfire..your verse was good you had ok punches, your flow was ok, jus like Oc6 you had no personals or wordplay, but you had an ok verse. For me it came down to the openers Oc6: Battle with Oc6, leaving ya fucked up signing off ya disability check/ You couldn't spit fire if I put hot sauce on the mic and you swallowed it/ Spitfire:itte hurr comes anotha one 4 tha kidds\\ imma bout to teach Oc6 The Caustic a lesson he will never 4get\\ Oc6's opener was way stronger than spitfire's, an for me that won the battle, but y'all both need to elevate but good battle. Vote: Oc6 |
itte sum nice clean votes
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i agree wit triple n both of yall came real strong
oc6-u had some real good shit i liked yo flow homie u had some good vocab some good struture and good punches worstline-You burn the innocent? We'll I burn the fuckin' guilty/ And your guilty of losing this battle, voted by the Frontline Emcees/ wont feelin dat ^^^^^ bestline- And I'll have ya running up and down helpless, just like ya avatar/ ^^^ did dat rhyme wit stirred??? spit- descent verse not all dat but it was descent u also had good structure vocab and punches bestline-im tha king an u peasent of dis rap game\\ i won't stop at nuttin to finish u off,cut chu neck an rip out cha brain\\ wostline-im real violent when i start my method of physical dismantle\\ want a demonstration come hurr bring legg imma gently rib it off by my manhandle\\ some of yo sentences was longer than the otha u need 2 even it out but all in out love yo flow 2 be new oc6 punches-7/10 struture-8/10 vocab-7/10 flow-7/10 start-8/10 ending-9/10 overall-9/10 spit- punches-7/10 struture-8/10 vocab-7/10 flow-7/10 start-9/10 ending-8/10 overall-9/10 imma base this on how many personals and spit won personals since yall tied in overall so vote to spit |
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