Denver Max Vs. WildFire
 

you spit first

10-30 bars
no dick ridin
no hate votes

good luck

ok.

I'm extra strength, you're chewable tablets
I've got extra length, you've got disgusting man tits
I dont know you, but i bet you're fat
and if no one likes you, it's because you're fat.
Wildfire huh? you're just a big wisher
i'm a wizard! (poof) now i'm a fire extinguisher!
Have you tried febreze? i bet your whole family stinks
and i bet they all hate you like you're jar jar binx.
you better believe that's a star wars metaphor
but seriously, i'm white, what more could you be asking for?

hahahahaahahhahaahahh............................. ......................funniest shit i've ever seen

wildfire's running like a bitch............a trick ass bitch.

lol um that waz a battle verse?

come on wildfire........................................

I'ts time for me to crush this cracker like he was a ritz
everything you just spit was crap, like you got the shits

you'll never put me out with an extinguisher by your lonesome
"is it even a possibility to put you out?" the answer is no son


jar jar binx? who the fuck are you kiddin?
your style is disgraceful, it needs to be forbidden

cause nobody likes those weak rhymes but you and Jpoll
and thats only cause you dickride on him, usin birth control

your rhymes arn't fly but lack substance so i consider them weightless
I'm happy for you, cause before you met JPoll you were always left dateless

Now look at you, your best buds on the rapbattles.com
votin for eachother, you can't win with just the mic in your palm

I know when i drop this Jpolls gonna vote for Denver Max
don't matter tho cause you couldn't kill me with anthrax

so i guess the voting will end up 5-1 and i end up winnin
if this was baseball, i won in the top of the first inning

youre an idiot wildfire.......and by the way that was a terrible verse.......do you know how to rhyme>?

i like his style cause he's original....and well you ar enot....you're terrible

see that rhymed, GET IT?
haha
I'ts time for me to crush this cracker like he was a ritz
everything you just spit was crap, like you got the shits
are you serious with this line. cause that' sprobably the most played out shit i've ever heard!

cause nobody likes those weak rhymes but you and Jpoll
and thats only cause you dickride on him, usin birth control
this doesn't even rhyme you idiot


Now look at you, your best buds on the rapbattles.com
votin for eachother, you can't win with just the mic in your palm
this doesn't make sense buddy good try,,, sorry but no

Vote goes to WildFire...

Denver Max:
I'm extra strength, you're chewable tablets
I've got extra length, you've got disgusting man tits

Okay, decent multi but the punch sucks and the setup doesn't make sense...chewable tablets can be extra strength too...

I dont know you, but i bet you're fat
and if no one likes you, it's because you're fat.

This is just stupid. I guess I'm railing against this in lots of posts lately, but if you're gonna rhyme the same word at the end of your bars, at least make the punch really strong! :banghead:

Wildfire huh? you're just a big wisher
i'm a wizard! (poof) now i'm a fire extinguisher!

Kinda clever, decent punch, decent multi...

Have you tried febreze? i bet your whole family stinks
and i bet they all hate you like you're jar jar binx.

This rhyme is SOOOOO fucking played. Jar Jar Binx?!

you better believe that's a star wars metaphor
but seriously, i'm white, what more could you be asking for?

Actually, it's a Star Wars "simile" because you said he's "like" something, you didn't say he is something...regardless, weak as a closer...

Overall: The rhyme is built on generic punchlines trying hard to sound personal; If Wild IS fat, then it's a personal...if he's not, it's just stupid. Didn't cover much new ground, wasn't all that clever; it flowed well though.

WildFire:

I'ts time for me to crush this cracker like he was a ritz
everything you just spit was crap, like you got the shits

I like the setup better than the punch, but it's not that strong enough to be an opener.

you'll never put me out with an extinguisher by your lonesome
"is it even a possibility to put you out?" the answer is no son

Flows a little off, wording's a little awkward...

jar jar binx? who the fuck are you kiddin?
your style is disgraceful, it needs to be forbidden

Set-up had some promise, didn't follow through as well as I would've liked to see...

cause nobody likes those weak rhymes but you and Jpoll
and thats only cause you dickride on him, usin birth control

Decent personal...

your rhymes arn't fly but lack substance so i consider them weightless
I'm happy for you, cause before you met JPoll you were always left dateless

Nice personal punch, the couplet is a little awkward and crammed though...

Now look at you, your best buds on the rapbattles.com
votin for eachother, you can't win with just the mic in your palm

good flow, decent personal...

I know when i drop this Jpolls gonna vote for Denver Max
don't matter tho cause you couldn't kill me with anthrax

This works to me just because Jpoll did...lol...

so i guess the voting will end up 5-1 and i end up winnin
if this was baseball, i won in the top of the first inning

Eh...wasn't impressed with this as a closer...

Overall: Liked that it was a lot more personal, a lot more relevant to whats going on right now, in this thread as opposed to being generic battle lines that could've been written against ANY opponent...That being said, it did flip into generic shit a bit that weakened it overall.

Nod to WildFire...

Check it my vote is goin to Wildfire

Denver Max displayed some clever shit especially with the lines
"Wildfire huh? you're just a big wisher
i'm a wizard! (poof) now i'm a fire extinguisher!"
Denver showed some good originality and threw some good punches but lost it once he hit the star wars shit.

Wildfire came out swinging and dropped Denver straight up.
His punches were all good, a strong start and a strong finish.
His flow was good along with some good originality.
"I know when i drop this Jpolls gonna vote for Denver Max
don't matter tho cause you couldn't kill me with anthrax"
this was a gud line cuz those 2 do vote 4 each other a lot but that is most likely down to their skill cuz they both got a lot.

A fairly even fight but i'm givin to Wildfire.
Maybe if u wud have killed the star wars shit u wud have won!!

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335

alright denver max, you showed some potential, but you had a few lines that ruined your chances at all. your punches that were good were decent, that star wars shit was whack tho you had good originality, but you need to elevate

wild fire, i've seen better but you countered his verse well, had strong personals, and it made it twice is good cause JPOLL did vote for him, and his excuse didn't even make sense, you had good punches tho, it flowed decently, it was just over all decent,,got the job done...my vote wild

uppin for votes...................................

damn that was lame
denver max are u serious, please reconsider, or bak 2 da drawing board

wildfire u had some koo lines but i think u kept hittin the same points
open yur mind, and open yur flows up with some hott vocab and different rhyme schemes. if the other kat wasnt so wack, then this verse you droped wouldnt be enuf.
but he is wack and u droped just enuf but i think u are capable of better.

vote = wildfire due to lack of competition
just call it how i c it
hit my battles yo

afterword you don't need to tell me...i step up when it's needed....i kept hittin the same points cause i KNEW that faggot jpoll would vote for him...thanks for the vote tho

one more vote...come on peeps lets close this and get it out of the way