Shadows edge vs Denver Max
 

You spit first, 10-14 lines cuz I'm tired, drop and I'll drop in 20 minutes

alright. this is my "spit"

If this were monopoly, you'd be Baltic Avenue
I'd ofcourse be boardwalk, where i'd sit and laugh at you.
I'd have hotels on my lot, and i'd lay in my cot
you'd be my butler, i like my porridge hot.
I'll make you sweat cause my rhymes are so ill
Get you healthy and fit like the george forman grill.
You've got trouble with your gameplan like the philadelphia eagles
i'll make you run like a flock of seagulls.
I dont know what else to say cause i hate rap
but i really like Michael Bolton.....

hahahhahhahahhhhhahahha........................... ..............................wow that was tight....finally something original

He posted that in the bitch slapped thread: http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...947#post1230947

and...........???????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????????are you going to come back?

yeah sorry, i fucked up. i am deeply, deeply sorry.

oh shit, I didn't realize you put it here too. sorry man. anyway, I'm tired so I'm just keystyling this shit:

BETWEEN THE TWO OF US, YOU FINISH THIRD
CANT MACH THE MASTER OF THE WRITTEN WORD
ID BE ANOREXIC IF I FED OF YOUR RHYMES
N ID GET CHANGE IF I BOUGHT YOUR GIRL FOR TWO DIMES
YO I SPIT FIRE, THIS BATTLE IS LIKE A LIVING CREMATION
DONT APROACH THIS MAN, IM GODS ONE DAY CREATION
YOUR RAP CAREER ABOUT TO BE ON PERMANENT VACATION
GET BACK TO BEING ON N'SYNC'S BACKUP BAND, FOOL
I RIP THE MIC SO HARD I TOOK YOUR HAND TOO
LEAVES YOU WITH 5 FINGERS TO COUNT THE DICKS YOU JERCKED
AND ME 5 FINGERS, ONE FOR EACH HERB CREW I MERCKED

lol .. didn't even notice that my CAPS LOCK was on ^^

Ok, I was helping my room mate with some homework, I'm sorry, please find it in your heart to forgive me. Shit, look at my rhyme, no way did I spend more than 5 minutes on that.

damn...can crew vote on this battle? cause if so my vote goes to shadows edge....shadow...you prolly didn't even know i wad down with Ill mental did you?...lol...decent drop the denver...u gonna drop on our battle?...by the way'

vote on this please

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119249

denmax/ stru 8/10
/flow it was hott 9/10
/punches hella blow 10/10
/img 10/10 nice but u wasn't good enough
ovall/ 8/10
shadow/ stru 9/10
/flow crazy hott 10/10
/punches itte 9/10
/img 10/10
shyte i was felling datt
ova all 10/10
v/shadow

yeah crew votes i guess so long as you explain that shit. yo spit you gotta actaully vote in the poll man ^^

uppin, can I at least get one fucking vote ^^ drop a link, I'll return the favor

Vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

haha....i'm still laughin and i heard this verse yesterday....mayhe people don't get it....hahah

but it was a tight battle, they came with it

BETWEEN THE TWO OF US, YOU FINISH THIRD
CANT MACH THE MASTER OF THE WRITTEN WORD
thatwas pretty tight....but not in the same way....it wasn't original like denvers shit

If this were monopoly, you'd be Baltic Avenue
I'd ofcourse be boardwalk, where i'd sit and laugh at you.
I'd have hotels on my lot, and i'd lay in my cot
you'd be my butler, i like my porridge hot.
I'll make you sweat cause my rhymes are so ill
Get you healthy and fit like the george forman grill.
You've got trouble with your gameplan like the philadelphia eagles
i'll make you run like a flock of seagulls.
I dont know what else to say cause i hate rap
but i really like Michael Bolton.....


sick sick ssick
flowed well sick punchlines....sick everything

this kids tight
vote denver