guyver4mk vs. WildFire
 

no dick ridin
no hate votes
10-30 bars
you spit first...good luck to ya

guy..you drop..i'll drop back tomorrow...i;'m goin to bed right now

The one man whose taken shit from here to new mexico/
Talkin to me like I'm nothin, while u workin in Texaco/
Pumpin gas for a livin, sittin at home readin my shit and sivin/
out a coupla lines to start ya verse and begin drillin/
at my soul and maybe increase my numbers in losses/
but I ain't gona make it easy, like a t-rex that flosses/
Don't say ya name when I come around I'm killin ya/
and a coupla punk ass bitches that act like benzino an ja/
I spit shit that kills, eats at ya heat an beats ya ear drums/
Make your ears bleed through ya walkman/
thats why pepole ignore you like u ain't even talkin/
ya punches like liquer, you spit and I drink it/
But the taste is dull, so back up I bring it/
ya shit hits like feathers an don't even have effect/
if you gona spit back then make sure ya shits corect/
i tell you that you puffy an you gon lose big/
Bust ya back tryin ta ride me, an I snap ya like a skinny twig/
clap back like ja rule then i'll make ya tap dance like redman/
think ya bad like dennis tha mennace, instead u jus desperate like dan/
for fame from the game an in my eyes you a gonner from here to forever/
cos u know your ass is gona get ripped apart from portland to denver/
u broker than al bundy, and retarded like rainman, u ain't even potty trained/
bitch u insane if u think u gona beat me in this game please try to refrain/
U only wanted to battle cos u thought it'd be an easy win/
I said it before and I'll say it again, compared to me, u nothin/

I only spit from here to mexico cause thats you reside at
a low life mexican who couldnt get jobs if his whole family tried that

ya i work at texaco bitch, atleast I'm employed
your rhymes couldn't outlift mine if they had steroids

how can i drill at your soul when it's non existant?
your rhymes are always garbage, atleast your consistent

thats all you are, the same shit over and over
i spit fire but you feel yourself gettin colder and colder

thats death comin near, stay away from that bright light
i want you to read the rest this before you quit the fight

the fight bein tryin to stay alive as long as possible
any chance of you beatin me isn't at all plausible

my punch is liquor? naw it's paint thinner
I'll drown this beginner in it than cook him for dinner

and i ain't dennis i'm the fire that he started
now i'm outa control thats consumed your dearly departed

your right, i was never potty trained i suppose thats why I'm shittin on you
you think your tight cause you get sex, but thats gross when families hittin on you

sorry to disapoint i realize you didn't know any better
and now that you know I'll help you with that suicide letter

"dear world wild fire just exposed me to the truth
I'm gettin dumber cause he knocked out my wisdom tooth

he really embarassed me, i can't look myself in the eye
he answered so many questions and I'm still wonderin why

why me, what did i to do? i wouldn't wish this on my worst enemy
if i could rewind time i'd go back and woulda never acted like an emcee

but it's too late the damage is done, my time here is finished
i would stick around but my self worth has been diminished

Mom, just so you know my death was fast and painless"

didn't i tell you i always leave emcees brainless?






*pay attention to the quotes*

Punches: Pretty even, I guess. Pretty good personals by guyver, not much in that regards by Wildfire, but Wildfire came more consistently, like guyver what was up with the T-Rex line??

Flow: Wildfire. Other than the "shitting on you.. hitting on you" line you flowed pretty well. guyver, gotta work on that, especially at the end. both y'all gotta add some multis though, with lines that long, and maybe vary it up or something to improve your flow.

Creativity/Vocab: Tie again. All the rhymes were pretty basic for the most part, neither verse was crazy creative, Wildfire did have that long mock quotation from guyver though, so I guess some props for that.

A line like this:

"think ya bad like dennis tha mennace, instead u jus desperate like dan/" would be good and original, but I have no idea who the fuck "dan" is.. so it does nothing for me. gotta strike a balance between what people can understand, and what they haven't heard before.

v/ wildfire, but pretty tight.

return the favor, honest votes on the battles in my sig.

wow, guyver. I think your stepped your game up big time for this one, no joke


The one man whose taken shit from here to new mexico/
Talkin to me like I'm nothin, while u workin in Texaco/

that was a decent line, i actually lauged when i read that, ypur punches were better than usual, so was everything else, but i still feel there is room for improvement.
I don't feel too much of your verse really attacked him that much, but i still enjoyed it

now we have wild fire. Jesus christ, you flipped a lot of what he said, had good punches, had one multi that i really liked and the whole suicide thing was very original and creative, i really really really liked that verse, some of the punches were lackin but over all it was good, my vote...wild fire

aight shadow thanks for the vote...I'ma hit up your battles right now

uppin for more votes..............................

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uppin one last time....COME ON....................

wow good battle both came with it
well first guyver4mk.....good shit best line;

The one man whose taken shit from here to new mexico/
Talkin to me like I'm nothin, while u workin in Texaco

worst line;
at my soul and maybe increase my numbers in losses/
but I ain't gona make it easy, like a t-rex that flosses
it doesn't really make any sense....just cause it rhymes don't put it in

good shit though....
now wildfire....wow you can rhyme

lot's of GREAT lines....and a couple fillers...

but in the mind wildfire takes it

I'll say this now to save confusion. Desperate Dan is a charachter in a UK comic.
And the T-Rex line is about the shortness of a T-rex's arms and them tryin to floss its teeth. It ain't gon be easy. thats what that means.

Uppin for votes!!

umm damm 100 lines lol nice battle tho

structure-wild
opener-nun...
punchlines-wild
creativity-wild
wordplay-wild
personals-wild
enjoyed-wildfire....wild fire got dis shit hands down yo nice lil flow and da personals was ill umm guy i wasn't really feelin ya shit dunn datz all

my vote-wildfire

Nice Battle On Both Sides I Enjoyed Both Of Them But WildFire Got This Shit No Doubt!! With Harder Punches' ...! His Structure Was A Bit Off' .. But Punches Got Him My Vote

Checckity Checkk These Lines:

how can i drill at your soul when it's non existant?
your rhymes are always garbage, atleast your consistent

your right, i was never potty trained i suppose thats why I'm shittin on you
you think your tight cause you get sex, but thats gross when families hittin on you

but it's too late the damage is done, my time here is finished
i would stick around but my self worth has been diminished

Mom, just so you know my death was fast and painless"

didn't i tell you i always leave emcees brainless?


^^That Shit Is Heated.. Could Have Improved In Some Spots' .. But Nice Drop