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In-Vision 04-14-04 06:54 AM

adamtomo vs. WildFire
 
10-30 bars
no dick ridin
no hate votes
you spit first

adamtomo 04-14-04 06:57 AM

do uz a favour man,u spit first i aint done this b4,

In-Vision 04-14-04 06:58 AM

you go first...or no battle...theres no guarntee how long you will take after i drop my verse...

adamtomo 04-14-04 07:06 AM

ok..... no guarantee.ok holla at this.....u wana battle against me ur tounge ul get sore/my rap styles raw uz a backstreet whore/i dnt mean no disrespect/i just u want u yo put me to the test/give me sum shit 2 spit against n ill show u im the best

In-Vision 04-14-04 07:08 AM

is that your verse????????????????????????????????

adamtomo 04-14-04 07:15 AM

yep!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!

In-Vision 04-14-04 07:25 AM

your rappin is horrible, worst i've ever heard..
you want feedback? your style is absurd...

i don't even need to rhyme to beat you
my first couplet was all i needed to defeat you

notice i said you needed 10-30 bars
you had 5...thats 25 short..ya i like cars

see you lose cause you ignored the rules
left yourself lookin like a 35 year old illiterate fool

these are my last two bars i hope you liked my rhyme
think about killin yourself, suicide isn't a crime

MisterE21 04-14-04 07:33 AM

Alright, quick and simple. The nod to WildFire.

Adam, your rhymes were weak, pointless and unoriginal (since you basically copied the first part of the rhyme you posted in Emcee Introductions). Plus, you were too short and didn't adhere to the rules.

Wild, that shit was way below your level but, reading Adam's rhyme, I guess I can understand why you didn't even really try. "You had 5...thats 25 short...ya I like cars"???? wtf? Anyway, yeah...obviously you won. Oh, and buy the way, in most places suicide is technically illegal. ;)

WildFire wins.

adamtomo 04-14-04 07:46 AM

my style is absurd,twisted and warped for words
but im here 2 b heard so listen as i spit the verb.

u dnt need rhyme 2 beat me? bitch dont fukin treat me,
im an mc-i spit neatly.

whats all this about-i like cars? i like the fukin stars/
but i dnt feel the need to go put that in my bars!

i might sound like an illiterate fool,but yo i think thats cool
were lacking a bit of od school.but i didnt make the rule

so this is wot i think of ur rhyme,its lazy n outta time,
oh yeh and by the way,........................ suicide IS a crime.

In-Vision 04-14-04 07:56 AM

you know..that was OK....not better than OK tho...thing is...i could easily beat that...you tried to trick me..and i knew you would...you decided to break the rules...you said that above rhyme was your verse...if you want to try again...you gon' have to make a new thread...i wouldn't do that tho if i were you...anyways...nice try...i saw it commin

sicker_than_HIV 04-14-04 08:01 AM

Okay you fucked up by not followin the rules.

Technically, Wild fire won because his verse was easily better than your first, his punches were better, everything was better

you tried to trick him just so you could have a chance at winning, which is why I will not vote for you. Besides that, your verse wasn't good even after you tricked him

you had soft ass punchlines, no metas no anything

adamtomo 04-14-04 08:01 AM

i wasnt tryin trick u, jst neva done this b4, but now i know the score,ill b cumin back 4 more,i didnt understand the rules,u made me look a fool. thanx 4 ur time. catchya lata.

adamtomo 04-14-04 09:05 AM

battle me
 
u fancy another battle wildfire? or anyone?????????????????????????

In-Vision 04-14-04 05:14 PM

you spit first...and I'll battle you again...but in the mean time lets get some votes to close this shit

Shadows edge 04-14-04 05:29 PM

yo vote back on my battles fellas:

alright, check it. all 3 verses in this thread sucked hard, but basically wild had enough to win.. i mean wtf was that adam.. you had like 5 lines, does'nt even meet the minimum for a battle in front lines, not to mention that you had no good punches.

v/ wildfire.


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