CounTREE Jay Vs. adamtomo
 

Aight, here we go.

5-10bars
NO D/R or Hate Votes
5-0 ko
3-0 TKO
And check and then drop at the same time

Let's do this

Check 1-2, Check 1-2, Come on down homie, so we can dodadamnthang

listen as i spit/coz wen i spit i cum raw/leave ur ass leaking in the back seat of a contour/u see this time its the real me/styles so violent and deadly/lyrics harder than a marvyn gaye medley/i chase u like a cat up a tree/ u wana run instead ov tryin n immatate me!/so step off the stage/as i flip this last page/dnt turn around n watch 4 tha 12 gauge.

Aight, we were supposed to check and drop at the same time, but aight, whateva.

Newb excited to be on Rb, thinkin' "Now I'm a real M.C.",
But you can't get down, like a cat stuck up in a tree.
That's right, ain't no escape, there ain't no way to hide,
Only nigga that bends over when cat's ask if you wanna ride.
Nigga, You a disgrace, you shouldn't even show your face,
U don't need to put this man in the lost N' found, Jay 'gon put him in his place.
I was tryin' to decipher what yo name means as best as i can,
But I got it, It's adam and tom, a shout to U and your man.
But these day's they say gay is ok, so ima cut you some slack,
Just make sure any time I walk around you, that I literally watch my back.

aight

uppin' 4 votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

alright, it's clear Jay won this won,

flow = jay, adam had a to basic flow, and it didn't rhyme
Punch = well both of you had weak punches, Jay had a few, but were still not strong,
Mulit's = alright, jay got a 7/10 on this one, and adam, just set up ur lines better like this:

listen as i spit/
coz wen i spit i cum raw/
leave ur ass leaking in the back seat of a contour/
u see this time its the real me/
styles so violent and deadly/
lyrics harder than a marvyn gaye medley/
i chase u like a cat up a tree/
u wana run instead ov tryin n immatate me!/so step off the stage/
as i flip this last page/
dnt turn around n watch 4 tha 12 gauge.

you get me...alright overall, this goes to Jay!!

uppin' 4 votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

yeah i not gonna do i big breakdown for this battle not enough in adamtomo's verse to need it,my vote is for jay just cause he came with a real verse, it had a flow punches and average volcab, where in this other kid shit he had three four words bars and still the flow was kinda choppy and the volcab was nothing no real punches either not hating shit it just wasn't great

vote-- countree jay

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Jay... your verse was pretty week. I've seen you do much better. The rhyming was pretty simple, wasn't all too original, there was one personal that was ok, but the rest wasn't all that great. But still... adamanto.. man your lines are too short, half the shit ain't really a punch and the whole thing is just like a generic pre write. Try to get original, get creative with rhymes, use personals, etc.

v/ Jay.

Hit up the battles in my sig.

It is obvious who the champ of this battle is.

Adam had no structure really which really cut down on how his rap flowed.
Jay had good flow and clearly showed who had more experience.
Both through weak punches mainly but Jay really ripped Adam with the gay diss at the end. Adam put up an average performance whilst Jay was slightly better and Jay finished strong.

My pick for this is Jay all the way.

Vote on my battles playas.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290

Good look on the love niggaz, I need this shit to get closed out. And I didn't wanna come wit a fuckin' john Blaze ass verse when i obviously didn't need it. Ya feel me?

This was an overall weak battle..but jay didn't need a strong verse to take this won anyway, y'all both had ok flow an weak punches. Jay you should have came a little harder than that, an adam you need alot of work however it was a decent verse.
Flow: Jay
punches: jay
structure: jay
vocab: jay
Thats all there was to vote on
Vote: Jay