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streetsweepa vrs. $$$tim$$$
8 lin min
no d/r no crew votes bitches go first |
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im goin to pick up some stuff for my mom u spit first ill bbl later good luck |
im checkin in .........this nigga dont gotta chance ......
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who diss nigga dats wants to ryhme like me?//
ill fill thiss niga wit slugs and leave him with an ivy// doctors tryin to save but his heart wont beat!!!!!.......yea thiss nigga is here juss to die on the streets yea who would kno u would have went to and had your ass kicked...now ya momma has to pay for another casket!!!! have ya boys drive up where the shots wherr fired at ...leave ya blood stain next to the slugs that where fired at look this nigga coughing he cant breathe...he prasein god please HELP ME!!! no no no he aint gettin no response back ..u already cheated death once ..muh mutha fuckin gat packed a punch!!!! everybody hears words..but the words dont mean shit.....everybody knos that this nigga cant spit !!!!! heheh nigga try to finish that one off !!!!! |
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alright im back and ready wtf ur llready offline? ok ill spit neway |
u say i try to ryme like u//
come on nigga u shyt is wack and u kno thats true// u wanted to battle me? ur weak u should have thought that through// come on bitch your worse than u crew// ur punches are soft and dont connect// next time you battle atleast give it good intellect// u talk shit but ur wak ill teach u some respect// we all kno ur punches are soft and dont take effect// u act like ur shit was hard and u i had some thing to fear// man u should sing country music cuz you dont belong here// |
both average spits that have room for improvement
both had good flow and structure what streetsweepa lacked on originality he made up for with punches that finish was gud also that earns u some points $$$tim$$$ u was average wiv some good punches but u also lacked originality so my vote just swings tha way of streetsweepa vote on these so i can free up a spot playas: franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374 franchiZe 0-1 Shadows edge http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290 franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293 franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 franchiZe 0-0 Ghost354 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335 |
Aight Check Dis..
$$$tim$$$: 3/10 I Dunno What You Were Spitting, But Your Structure Was Horrible. You Were Doing More Of A Topical Than A Battle. No Punches In Your Whole Spit. Flow Was Off....and Since No Punches That Means No Meta's and Multis. Just Elevate and Remember When Battling Use "Battling" Structure and USE PUNCHES!! Just Elevate Pimpin. StreetSweepa: 5/10 Your Flow Was Nice, Definitly Towards The End. Not Really and Metaphors and Multiples But Atleast You Had Punches. Sum Definitly Hit Hard While Sum Didn't. Just Elevate On Word Usuage and Metaphors. Creativity Also Helps. Just Elevate and Stay Dope. Vote - StreetSweepa *Best Line* u talk shit but ur wak ill teach u some respect// we all kno ur punches are soft and dont take effect// ^Syck Flow and Punch^ |
spit: street
punch:street thought into it: street stim..your rhymes were alright..but ur newb so i'll give u a break...ur punch isn't good at all..and had no multi's..alright..so just keep spittin..you'll elevate sooner or later |
come on come on uppin for votes oh yea $$$ tim $$$ that wasnt bad for ur first battle but u didnt throw any punches u need to throw punches cant win with out them holla back
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I felt tim's was fake... I mean.. slugs..... death.. bleh.. BORING.. wut u just listen to the 50 cent cd? fuckkkkk .... anyways it was fake.. NO punches at all.. dont just diss.. punch..as for sweepa's well. he gets my vote cuz I aint feelin the whole fake shit from tim.. and second cuz he flipped a few things on tim..
like this line.. "next time you battle atleast give it good intellect//" liked that cuz is true.... both had good flow and structure but.. street sweepa won easily peace |
Street sweooer take this cuz he had better everything/Good battle to both bt sweeper cmae harder
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