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streetsweepa vrs. white-ice
12 line max
no d/r no crew votes u spit first streetsweepa = $$$tim$$$. Both DQ'ed and banned for cheating -Cprogress |
come on man we gonna battle or what? u called me out lets do this
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spit shit
listen as i spit,coz wen i spit i cum raw/leave ur ass thinkin wot the fucks gone on yah?
u think uz a jay-z/but without the pay G/ ur rapstyles la-zy/itd b quicker 2 page me/ see i can bust a rhyme ,in twice quick tha time so read between my lines, n u 2 my start 2 shine! but thats impossible/coz im 2 philosophical/ but dnt let that stop u..hve a go/ ur not the only one ive cum across whos jst an average joe. u see theres wit in wot i spit/n u 2z gona b gone like king kong,thinking u can stay up here...but ur wrong!! |
come on nigga u cant spit ur structure is weak//
ur punches dont connect, and my shit is elite// u call ur self white ice// what the fuck kinda name is ICE?? atleast try to improvise!// u call me the average joe// nigga u the one that rymes like a hoe// yea ur name is right, your whole rymescheme is frozen cold// yea and ur rhymes old and week it might fold// where did u steal all theme rymes from a book?// thats called plagerism u fuckin crook// you might say your philosophical, ur punches are weak// see this fucking win against u will be bitter sweet// i didnt even have to try hard, cuz u brought the ice but i brought the HEAT// |
both of you need to elevate. white: can't call yourself philosophical, either your rhymes use metaphores, and are deep, use wordplay, etc or they don't. yours dont, so its not philosophical. any sentence that reads "2 philosophical" is just a joke. also, your structure is beyond fucked up.
street: aight, you also gotta work on your structure, put some multis in there to work on the flow, work on your punches, cuz urs are a little played. at least you brought some personalls. v/ street vote on Shadow v franchiZe |
yo this battle was tight ...street was rhymein aight at forst than gradually got betta...whit ice u need to work alot man im tellin you..also white..u need to stop talkin bout cum and shit u crazy ass WHITE BRITISH BASTARD!!!!!!
BEST LINE : come on nigga u cant spit ur structure is weak// ur punches dont connect, and my shit is elite// VOTE GOES TO STREETSWEEPA |
thanx 4 the vote but dnt tek the piss you fukin yank.if ur so hot spit sum shit,n ill rip u 2 fukin bits.prick :thefinger
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u gonna rip me to bits huh
lets do thiss bitch and we'll see whos been ripped |
lets go ill set this shit up right now
scared lil bitch |
yo i thought it was all good but see the structure wassint right the shit i chouldint keep it goin n flowin it was like 1 rhyme then to many lines for the next rhyme well i kno my vote im stickin wittit iight 1
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i give this to streetsweepa he came sicker better flow better everything..another easy win was really good lmfao........
punch:street flow:street structure:street vote:street |
Streetsweepa had an actual verse in this battle, I don't know what that was ice but it wasn't a battle verse
Flow: street structure: street punches: street vote: street |
Come on sTreet swweepa soick
no prob fo him all i gotz ta say |
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wow, im not gonna say anymore super ultra whack 1/10 Quote:
better verse, not good though 3/10 |
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