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mic-wrecker VS. franchiZe
check it mic-wrecker
tha rules go like this 10-20 lines max. no d/r no hate no crew u spit first! |
imma do it 1st thing tommorrow it'll b up by 1200 eastern time
im out im sleepy but u got my word it'll b up by 12 eastern holla pim p get cha rhymes up |
ok this bitch dont want none of me u can tell
so i'm gonna lay my shit out now 4 ya Yo dawg, if u didn’t want to go first then u just had 2 say so// Instead of runnin away, I thought u were a rapper……not a ho// His real reason 4 leavin is he’s got no shit 2 borrow// Plus his mom said she’d rap 4 him, but not till 2morrow// I see that ure record states that its 8 wins to one// But the odds of u winnin this battle are zero to none// Yo I checked this bitches battles, he likes 2 focus on the ass// He really don’t wanna battle me cuz he’s got a YMCA class// I’m Daniel-san with my karate kick makin u groggy// U gonna drop from a karate chop from my dog Mr. Miagi// Look here homeboy u dealin wiv a five star gangsta// There’s a song about u by 50 Cent……its called Wanksta// I’m fresh of tha jet ready 2 rack up K.O’s like I’m rocky// I dominate this shit like tha red wings dominate hockey// Mic-wreckers probably gonna put out some kiddy ass spit// It’ll probably go like this so listen up and check it// “Fe-fi-fo-fum, I like to jerk off whilst suckin my thumb”// “I like to give it hard up tha bum”// “if only my winky cud produce some cum!”// PEACE MUTHAFUCKA!!! |
hahahahahah.............
funny....comedy...... its time to cut the jokes get to spittin an expose this faker/u no my lyrics is the shit an yo lips is the toilet paper/ im dealin wit a 5 star gangsta nigga is that so/wen the only time u gripped iron is to get the wrinkles out yo clothes/ how da fucc u gon spit against me wit dat trashy mess/caz da's a quic way to get yo forehead used for a ballistic test/ yes its mic-wrecker again squashin the homo shit/stompin on another emcee grippin the mic with a lisp and a limp wrist/ i aint a fan of da momma jokes so yo best bet is to quit it/wen to put clothes on yo back yo mom slaves in the red light district/ suckin an fuckin 4 a career 9 to 5 probably/but ill have her "jerk off my wink" so u can get a pair of decent nikes/ rb how u gon let this nigga call himself da franchize/wen his chances of winnin are slimmer than yao mings eyes/ here comes the giant fe-fi-fo-fum yo defeat is on the brink/ jerkin off while suckin my thumb so ya mom'll have somethin to drink/ now how's that for some kiddy shit flippin ya lame lines like coke/ stealin a victory from ya grasp wit the same shit U WROTE/ i dont wanna take ya life along wit ya spirit i'll save ya ass/ it's 230 i didnt plan murkin niggaz on my way to my YMCA CLASS/hahahahahaha pussy..... nigga dont u eva in yo life talk about my momma again like u run this...... i wasnt even takin u serious till i seen them dumb ass linez dont eva in yo life talk shit about me nigga brush yo teeth 4 u talk bad about me hahahahahahah comedy |
funny shit
gud fresh battle but please, rippin off my shit is a tru sign of no talent next time try and step wiv sum fresh rippin anyway, lets get uppin these votes and vote on my ova battles 2 franchiZe 1-3 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 franchiZe 4-0 Ghost354 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335 |
get uppin these votes
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up sum votes on this battle and check out my ova battles
franchiZe 1-3 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 mic-wrecker 0-0 franchiZe http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119505 franchiZe 0-1 creaTivitie http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119662 daClassic 2-0 franchiZe http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119675 |
I’m fresh of tha jet ready 2 rack up K.O’s like I’m rocky//
I dominate this shit like tha red wings dominate hockey// i like dat shytdat shyt tight i giv u a 6/10 not bad but also not the best Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
im jus makin this post so i cood vote ya niggas lucky ya get ma first vote lol
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up the votes on this shit please and i'll return da favour
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I gotta give this battle to franch, he had some harder punches and better flow.. I just was feelin his more, MC man half your shit didnt even ryme... and your flow wasnt that hot at all.. work on your punches and flow and you will get better.. as long as your shit rymes.
Vote - FRANCH Return the Fav http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119658 |
Breakdown
Yo, Franch's flow was way hotter then mic's. Mic's, It might of been just me but your rhyme scheme was out of proportion, some words didn't fit together. Franch had harder punches and his wordplay and vocab. was really good. Mic, you need to work on your punches and personly's, I was feelin' Franch's verse way more, he brought it to ya.
Vote: Franchize |
franchize took dat 1 flow was sick structure was sick it was all tight
mic-wrecker what the hekk u juss funny not sexy na juss play fa real franchize took dat wun better luck next time ill spot ya 1 time ight 1 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
get uppin some more votes on this battle
and drop sum links so i can vote on ure battles here are my other battles franchiZe 0-1 creaTivitie http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119662 franchiZe 2-4 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 |
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ok dat shyte was hott yah i was feeling dat bestline: look here home boy u dealin wiv a five star gangsta// there's a song about u by 50 Cent......its Called Wanksta// yo structure was tha best tha flow was tight to.ovall u getta 9/10 yo u hade sum hot shyte too best line:i don't wanna take yah life along wit yah spirit ill save yah ass its 230 I didn't plan murking niggaz on my way to my YMCA classess// dat shyte was hott to good vocabulary an punches blewem nice but my vote goes to /franchize |
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