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my first freestyle
We got all the freestylers on the bored tyna get a rap in//
But they dont wanna battle me cuz they'll know what'll happen// Theres all these white people pretendin they're black...tryna be Eminem// But errybody knows that only I can see him// Yeah this is my first freestyle// But read this and you'll leave wit a smile// After dis ill be flowin all da time// cuz now i know that i really can rhyme// thats it im done take da mic// but wait erryone grab a pillow cuz we'll be hurr all night// Tell me what ya'll think... |
$$tim$$$
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yea yea nigga that shit was tight honestly nigga..had good punches and tha last verse "im done on tha mic..wait everybody grab a pillow cuz we be here all night" yea that shit was tight ....good shit nigga ...good shit!!! $$$tim$$$ |
^^^I agree, you had a nice closer, the reat was ok keep droppin' son
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33 y yall got the samew ip????????????????????????????????
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yo mane thats some good shyt, but dont be hattin whites, just cuz all yall got dark skin dont mean us whites havent lived the same lives....i aint tryin to start no beef, but god damn, im tired of hearin dat shit :cussing: ...on the real though, keep it up :thefinger
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