missfiyagurl vs Triple_N
 

Ah'ight here the rules
no d/r votes
10-20 lines
u drop first

listen up
 

On the contrary negro y blanco
Ya real stupid ya stuck like Velcro
Say ya got them glots, gun shots
Hittin’ my block, but ya stopped
Why? Cuz I landed wit’ them 47 A-Ks
Ya ran scared cuz they all in ya face
While ya knockin’ on wood, I’m just
Pickin’ pace u wish ya could, nigga rest
He rockin’ the NIKE’s cuz this nigga got AIR
He keep stoppin’ ta breathe, we’d tell ya if we cared
His self-esteem is blown, he ate by this lil gurl
Fiya took it home, he still down on the swirl
Now he think he nuts, catch this lunatic
Ain’t a nigga but I cut, thrown measures ‘be legitimate
Ya tossin’ pennies while I’m droppin’ dimes
Ooh he can get me, but I beat his ass half blind
Aint seein wut u do but I’m well prepared
He actin’ hype tryna pretend my image aint there
They came back please call my third exorcist
Stutter n spit ur words wit’ that lame ass lisp…

I'm a get charged for arson for blazin' up this squirl
She runnin' da street on fire, now she's literally "missfiyagurl"
U dreamin' if u think gon' win, cuz I'm a real solider
My bitchslap will wake ya ass up faster than "folgers"
So, let me give your sorry ass some tips
My sound's platinum, yours is similar to when a CD skips
The rap genre is not for u shawtie, your a crock
You should dropout of rap, an attend the "school of rock"
I eat bitch emcees like you at lunch time
Cuz my shit hit so hard I literally "punch lines"
Your nothin' compared to me bitch, u jus shitty
ya rhymes still wouldn't be hot if u hold dem under ya tittie


I think that should do it, one

Missfiyagurl' ...! - Need To Work On Your Structure' .. Your Lines Feel A Bit Short Witch Threw Your Flow Off Balance' .. But I Was Feeling Your Verse!!' .... Just Need To Work On WordPlay & Vocab.... Plus Structure!!


Triple_N Got This Shit' ... !! By A Bit!! lol....


I'm a get charged for arson for blazin' up this squirl
She runnin' da street on fire, now she's literally "missfiyagurl"

^Alright Opener!! 8/10

Your nothin' compared to me bitch, u jus shitty
ya rhymes still wouldn't be hot if u hold dem under ya tittie

^Lol' ... Alright Closer!! 9/10

missyyagirl, or whatever your name is...YOU SUCK!!! nah im just playin. u gotta make sure the raps makhat they rhyme. i can see u tryin tho. triple N was kinda wac but he did good enough to win.

Triple N..... Is A Bitch......
Y U Battling Girls....

Man its a fuckin' battle, who else is she gonna battle? The majority is guys. It's good practice for her, Triple N is battling her because no other cats won't. Shit dawg.

Anyways:

missfiyagurl - Your structure was not as solid, but your wordplay I thought was good. Need some more personly's and multi's in there. Your flow wasn't as good as Triple N's, but you had an idea going.
Best Line: "Now he think he nuts, catch this lunatic
Ain’t a nigga but I cut, thrown measures ‘be legitimate" Nice line. Your ending could of been stronger also.

Triple N- Good structure and you have the tendecy to open up very powerful, always a check. You had nice Peronly's in there too and I was feelin' all of ya punches.
Best Line: "So, let me give your sorry ass some tips
My sound's platinum, yours is similar to when a CD skips"
You ended humorous and good.

Vote: Triple N

way to step up girl and battle good challengers, it only hepls ya.

Misfiya gurl u need really work on your verses for real but good shit u hanging in
there just try to come a bit harder and to use less wording on wat u trying to spit
but keep it up..

as for triple n u had a good pener and ender it was aight but battlin a girl??
dam never do that shit again next time u battle ur givin the other person
more ideas about punchlines an shit...bt yeah my vote goes to Triplle-n

right now breakdown for missfiyagurl:
punches 6/10
rymes 6/10
style 7/10
not bad not bad but u need some work thats all keep workin ull get this shyt
breakdown for triple n:
punches 8/10
ryhmes 8/10
style 7/10
u won this theres no debate u kept is short and sweet this was ur best line:
Your nothin' compared to me bitch, u jus shitty
ya rhymes still wouldn't be hot if u hold dem under ya tittie
that was fucking sweet u got my vote

missigirl u suck ass
3 took structure flow vocab personal punches
miss wotk on vocab personals structuire and flow ur verse coul;d have been really good
3 i was feelin ur verse work on vocab and personals
vote 3