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SPuL™ 04-16-04 10:44 PM

SPuL (8-3) v.s Yung Duke (8-3) (THE FINALE)
 
Aiight here is the deal. When SPuL first came into the rap game, his very first battle was wit Yung Duke aka the Young Dirty Bastard. It was a hard fought battle. SPuL ended up snaggin' the 2 last votes and won it 5-4. Then a while later, the two Textcees decided to give it another go. Yung came lookin' for revenge and KO'd SPuL silly, even though SPuL spat a hot verse of his own. The 2 talked on AIM about a 3rd battle to settle it, and finally have decided to do it.
Since their last battle, SPuL is 6-2, while Yung is 4-1. They both have 8-3 records. Somethings gotta give. This should be a very hot battle.

^^lol

Aiight, here are the rules:
10-20 Line spit
Crew votes allowed cuz we rep same crew
No D/r and bullshit or hate votes
Blindspit
Get verse in by 11:10 tonight.

Check in before you spit. Good luck, Duke. :thumbup:

Yung Duke 04-16-04 11:47 PM

Spul you aint better than me, you only beat me 5-4,
And then I whooped you 5-0, now you wantin some more?
Been buggin me bout this battle all week, I guess I worry ya ass,
I’ll take a tip for Casino, beat you and then I’ll bury ya ass,
So go ahead and play off of my name, there still aint no stopping Duke,
The only thing funnier than you winnin this battle, is me loosin to you,
You’re record don’t mean shit, me and JOAT showed you what happens when u buck,
After me, every win on ya record was from niggaz who straight sucked.
So as far as I’m concerned, ya record is one and three,
But ya sig only show two losses, are you ashamed of ya battle wit DP,
See you aint known for spittin game, you known for talkin shit,
I’ll throw a Sucker Punchline, Under ya Lip,
Spul’s already a nobody, but he’ll be a bitch when the battles done,
So bleep bleep bleep that’s all folks, this battle is won…

~Yung Duke~

SPuL™ 04-16-04 11:53 PM

ok, here I go:

SPuL, you’re my boy”… man, cut it out wit that crap
Playin’ like you a magician, ‘bout to take an “L” outta yo hat
Understand since you beat me, I will now avenge
Let you win 5-0, set it up so I could take revenge
Is the reason you wanted to battle me, so you could get a fourth loss?
Sick are my rhymes, they make you green like tree moss
Betta off losin’… so you could go regather yourself
Even takin’ orders from a “Ho”… you might as well be Santa’s elf
Talkin’ all that smack… ‘bout how you reppin’ A-Town
Turn you upside down, like “Peace up, A-Town down”
Every lady hates you... so you need to masturbate
Rhymes all suck... you feed to elevate
Then you betta pick up a razor… and slice both yo wrists
Holdin’ your dick is not an option… now you must be fuckin’ pissed
Even you admit it… you call yourself a Dirty Bastard
Never will do no sexin’… jus like a church Pasteur
Duke is here… oh, no! Everybody scream!
Undestructable EmCee, man, please in yo dreams
Killin’ you, nigga… or droppin’ you like a nuke
Either way… we all kno “SPuL is betta then Duke”

aiight, uppin' for votes.

Yung Duke 04-16-04 11:59 PM

this nigga stole my style from our last battle.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117420

Yung Duke 04-17-04 12:00 AM

I just didnt make it bold last battle

SPuL™ 04-17-04 12:03 AM

yo, I ain't copied your style. You jus did the little 4 lines, I did a whole 20 lines. Plus I did it in a slightly dif way. But yea, I got inspired to do it that way. But I used it against you, cuz you used it against me. So I bettered your 4 lines wit 20 lines. But anyways, let's jus get to the votes.

SPuL™ 04-17-04 12:12 PM

uppin' for votes.

PoLiFicK 04-17-04 12:18 PM

ohh shit spul wat u did was tight man i like dat shit wit da shit comin down ahhhh dat was crazy........

check it loved yo verse young duke u kept it real and still had a nice flow and nice punches and good structure so check it

best line-See you aint known for spittin game, you known for talkin shit,
I’ll throw a Sucker Punchline, Under ya Lip,
^^^ hott shit homie

worsteline-Been buggin me bout this battle all week, I guess I worry ya ass,
I’ll take a tip for Casino, beat you and then I’ll bury ya ass,

spul u had a nice flow nice punhes and hot shit and incredible wat u did at the start of each verse dat shit was tight yo check it

bestline-Betta off losin’… so you could go regather yourself
Even takin’ orders from a “Ho”… you might as well be Santa’s elf

wosteline-didnt have 1 i think all yo shit was tight so u didnt have 1


duke-
punches-8/10
structure-8/10
vocab-8/10
flow-9/10
open-9/10
end-8/10
personals-8/10
overall-8.6/10

spul-
punches-8/10
structure-9/10
vocab-9/10
flow-9/10
open-9/10
end-8/10
personals-8/10
overall-9/10

GKillaz05 04-17-04 12:28 PM

SPuL - I liked your style there it was pretty hot, you had some hard punches and some good flow.. good battle.

Best Line - Killin’ you, nigga… or droppin’ you like a nuke
Either way… we all kno “SPuL is betta then Duke” (hot shit)

Worst Line - Talkin’ all that smack… ‘bout how you reppin’ A-Town
Turn you upside down, like “Peace up, A-Town down” (didnt like that to much, but s'all good)

Duke - Good spit from you, had a good flow goin and had some hard punches.

Best Line - Spul you aint better than me, you only beat me 5-4,
And then I whooped you 5-0, now you wantin some more? (best SPuls opener)

Worst Line - See you aint known for spittin game, you known for talkin shit,
I’ll throw a Sucker Punchline, Under ya Lip, (altight personal, coulda been better)

OVERALL - I got to give this to whom I thought brought it harder and that would be..... SPuL! I think that he just brought it harder and liked that style and flow, he had some good punches in there and some alright multi's. Duke man, your shit was tight also, I just thought SPuL brought it harder.. your shit was tight just need to step up on the punches.. good battle peeps.

VOTE - SPuL

Can you plz return the fav wit my battle wit NoNoNo thx
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119455

SPuL™ 04-17-04 04:32 PM

thanks for votin', y'all. Uppin' 2-0 me.

franchiZe 04-17-04 04:43 PM

Spul u had a good style goin there i luved the whole thing u got scrollin down
ure punches were solid along wit ure flow and structure.
Best Line
Then you betta pick up a razor… and slice both yo wrists
Holdin’ your dick is not an option… now you must be fuckin’ pissed
Worst Line
Is the reason you wanted to battle me, so you could get a fourth loss?
Sick are my rhymes, they make you green like tree moss
Duke u to had some sick flow and structure and ure punches were crackin makin it an even battle.
Best Line
Spul you aint better than me, you only beat me 5-4,
And then I whooped you 5-0, now you wantin some more?
Worst Line
See you aint known for spittin game, you known for talkin shit,
I’ll throw a Sucker Punchline, Under ya Lip,

Overall this was a tight battle and both of u laid out some sick shit. I thought that Spul came with better punches and that scrollin idea originated from u Duke but Spul stretched it 20 lines which was sick. No disrespect to u Duke cuz u came with hard punches to but i think Spul hit harder and connected better.
Vote = Spul

Vote on my battles playas
franchiZe 1-3 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
mic-wrecker 0-0 franchiZe
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119505
franchiZe 0-1 creaTivitie
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119662

Daclassic 04-17-04 05:16 PM

duke: good verse, vocab was aight, fair, but punches werent that hard ...what made your verse good was the personals, great job on u. wha tu need to work on is structure , wordplay and stronger punches

spul: great verse, vocab was okay but the creativity you bring was amazing. punches were a little harder then duke's but you were a little less on the personals.....but what u need to work on is ...structure...it was okay but it could of been better.

v/spul

L.I. 04-17-04 05:24 PM

ok...good battle
BREAKDOWN
Opener - SPuL...he had a meta that was nice...and a good punch...Yung urs was jus boring...no really big punch in it...
Punches - tie...both had even amount of hard hitting punches...
Flow - SPuL...simply flowed better...
Multi's - SPuL...he had multi's...yung u need to wwerk on multis...
Structure - Yung...SPuL work on ya structure...
Personals - Yung..he had more personals...
Enjoyment - SPuL...his shit going down the side was funny as hell...

VOTE - SPuL


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