Black Theif..VS..Fatal LyrikzZ
 

Alright You Know Rules Spit Ahead..

aiight is this another battle or just another roast//
just another reason why people shit on on tha West Coast//
And if you think you really gonna win son...who taught ya//
I'll leave cats at tha crime scene like "who shot ya?"//
Another cat from Cali who thiink he "hella" hot//
but u can get popped too...so u can be just like Pac//
cause California may know how to party///
but in tha dirty dirty all we do is ride wit shottys//
Fatal lyrics, or self inflicted wounds//
fuck killin u son...I'll shove ya back into tha womb.....a bloody tomb...RIP

I Leave This Boy Bruised Black And Blue.|
Finally You Posted But Like A Library Ya Post Was Overdue..|
Inflicting Wounds The Only Thing You Inflict Is Cancer And Diabetes.|
Next Time I Shouldnt Battle Him Cause He Causin Diseases.|
He Askin In Front Lines Can I Come Out And Play.|
And The Only Trigger He Pulled Was A Bottle Of Cleaning Spray.|
What Makes Him Have Confidence He Cant Even Spell.|
He Had A CORDLESS Phone But Shit Still He FELL.|
Last Line Have A Nice Day While I Inflict Venom In Ya Skin.|
He Tangled Like A ~Violin~ Within His Brain He Cant ~WIN~

Alright Please Vote On This POLL I Will Rturn FAVA

u forgot to add a poll....damn add a poll man

There LOl...

ah'ight this was a decent battle..you both dropped hard an came wit dat shit, ah'ight...Black u had good punches, and good flow, but no multies, personals,or wordplay, but a solid verse wit decent vocab, u need to elevate son

Fatal...you didn't really have any punches cuz ya setups were messed up, let me explain
I Leave This Boy Bruised Black And Blue.|
Finally You Posted But Like A Library Ya Post Was Overdue..|
The first line(set up) has nothing to do wit the punchline(2nd line)
but you had good flow an good vocab, no multies, or wordplay, kinda the same as black, keep elevatin' son
Punches: black
Personal: tie
Wordplay: tie
Flow: tie
opener: tie
closer: tie
Vote: black, no disrespect fatal
holla back
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119204

fatal....why u got tha poll closin at 2:22??!!?!!??

yo.. this is supposed to be a battle, not a poll.

aiight black u came aiight i think u coulda done better wasnt much to ya verse

quotable line

"Fatal lyrics, or self inflicted wounds//
fuck killin u son...I'll shove ya back into tha womb.....a bloody tomb"
^^ that was a nice closer and probably ya best line..i think u could have done better tho not many personals/punches no multis structure lacked sometimes...

fatal came nice too i would have expected more from you in this battle but u was still nice...

quotable line

"He Askin In Front Lines Can I Come Out And Play.|
And The Only Trigger He Pulled Was A Bottle Of Cleaning Spray"

^^ haha nice bar feelin it..u had a couple good multis some nice wordplay couple punches/personals.. all in all nice battle

vote : fatal lyrikzz

i messesd up....

Alright Ill make New one And Just Copy Paste Alright ???

aiight
preciate that...everyone can u plz vote again?Uno...

this wasnt one of tha best battles i've seen and in all honesty both spits were pretty weak. neither one of u were throwin hard punches but u both did have good flow and structure. black ure overall performance was better than fatal cuz ure flow was better and ure punches were harder.
fatal that was a really weak performance, u had ok flow and sum gud vocabs but that was all.
neither of u had decent wordplay or personals, u both need 2 elevate ure shit or u wont go far
vote= black

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