FlOw InTeLLiGeNt vs. Black Thief
 

aiight minimum 10 lines....no max
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any other questions read the sticky on "rules"in front lines

aiight im keying now what u want lines to be 10 min 20 max ?

o nvm no max aiight keyin now didnt see that ~1~

aiight

i wont harm ya head when i slice ya like PARM and CHEDD//
ill jus grab an axe and hack at blacks arms and legs//
my flows' hazerdous like diahreah with a laxative//
i'll never back your blasphemous, wack ass, attacks on Kids/
im teasin this bitch and uncovering his fears//
black u couldnt "hear-shit" if u had "assholes-for-ears"// :laugh:
this undercover narc is my hostage, i'll bitch slap you with my glock kid//
put a shot gun in ya mouth and expand ya thoughts quick//
its just the simple facts. you'll never reach my level//
im hotter than she devils in sheet metal tea kettles//
contest with flow? your efforts are low your chest'll go with stiffened blows//
dismissing foes with sickened shows to leave you froze and twitching hoe//
convincing?? NO, i wont believe you could achieve a belt status//
so dont decieve, you nose'll bleed when I leave your head backwards//
notice the style !? rip through your flesh as I cripple your best //
hitting your chest and cause a mess after its ripple effect //
Because my Lines Always Cause a Kill//
cause i be shittin on this nigga black like jonny knoxville//

~1~ match my lines

tryin ta spit like u got fire but u cant fool me
cause once ya take"to" and "R" from ya status u still a "new-b"
nigga u suck more than a ho who pussy burnin like fire
its like u got concrete timbs...u fail to elevate any higher
Flow Intelligent I shit on you like a pach-y-derm
Pack-a-germ make sure ya chest catch-that-burn
Send punches to ya email so they can connect at home
send a couple of whacks to ya dome
to tha point I have you staggering
stab u in ya abdomen
Got ya blood on my shoes so I'm mad again
Uplift ya body wit a couple of a hooks
Steal a "jab" to ya jaw...my hands aint nuthin but "crooks"
why you think the streets call me Black Thief?
Cause this shit aint just ink....
I steal ya soul when you sleep
you aint whole...u cant compete
you aint on my level you cant pimp this
I'm cheating....I'm rappin against a nigga from tha Special Olympics
Flow-Intelligent more like Flow-Irrelevant
tryin to spit polished diamonds...but his flow more like dust and sediment

gud battle from both of u
both had sum good flow in there with flow cumin out on top tho
not much to go on 4 originality and the punches were fairly weak only with a few gud punches in there
black, that flow-irrelevant has already been used on flow so that drops u sum points
heres tha basic laydown
flow intelligent
STRUCTURE - 7/10
FLOW - 7/10
PUNCHES - 6/10
ORIGINALITY - 5/10
OVERALL - 6.5/10
black thief
STRUCTURE - 5/10
FLOW - 5.5/10
PUNCHES - 5.5/10
ORIGINALITY - 6/10
OVERALL - 5/10

Both put up poor performances
Black this is tha first battle of ures i've seen but flow, i know u can do better than that!
Vote - flow

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uppin....

aight its like this. black thief definetely took it for punches, especially personals.

"you aint on my level you cant pimp this
I'm cheating....I'm rappin against a nigga from tha Special Olympics
Flow-Intelligent more like Flow-Irrelevant
tryin to spit polished diamonds...but his flow more like dust and sediment"

best punches in the whole battle, i think right there. the only problem is that you can see above, black you gotta work on your flow. both of you gotta work on rhyming too, but black you were more off on flow, structure, rhyming, multis and so on.

basically, you had the punches but FI had enough punches and much better technique to overcome. like this:

"
contest with flow? your efforts are low your chest'll go with stiffened blows//
dismissing foes with sickened shows to leave you froze and twitching hoe//"

nice mutli an pretty decent bar as well.. get more of that thief.

v/ flow

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aiight....I'm lovin tha feedback....appreciate tha honesty...uppin

good battle overall

flow intelligant had a decent opener and another pretty good closer with nice wordplay had some nice multies threw the verse specially the tea kettle shit that was sick punchs were kinda shaky on this battle and personals werent that conisitent but overall a good tight verse

black thief wasnt fealin that opener to much it was ok the closer was pretty sick good personal in it had some nice punchs at the end o the verse along with personals 2 but soem of the bars didnt rhyme and werent to many multis if u woulda spit the whole verse like the last bars u woulda had my vote

vote flow intelligent

since i cant vote yet i say Flow inteligent won dat nigga nasty, yo ya lyrics is off da chainz

uppin...

dat one goes to flow

To much wrong to say with Black theif shit sorry kidd some of your shit was tight though...

Flow better overall and plus I loved the structure

vote: Flow

its a wrapp

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