Kl!k vs Triple_N
 

The Rules
No d/r votes
No crew votes
10-20 lines
You spit first
45 mins to drop

Yo, I perform incest-in-their-lots ill get the-rest-of-you-shot and like 'stairmasters' Triple will never 'step-to-the-top'//1

Not 'kungfu' but ya 'neck-will-get-chopped' ,'Gunpoint'? Triple wants the 'Tech-to-my-crotch', you a text king?, you-with-respect-and-a-rep?,How-bout-not?// 2

My chants-harder id 'murder this faggot' but i cant 'stand-martyrs', cuz like 'eminem said' noone wants to hear rap-from-their-grandfather'// 3

'You beat me'? I see a number of times you were shun-and-beaten, hundred times you won-and-leadin? You must-be-cheatin// 4

Im done-competin taste buds in my tounge are-seein, that like 'male pornstars' Playboy has 'cum-to-get-eaten'// 5

Like 'peter pan' im 'off the hook' ill beat-ya-man, 'subliminal messages', he 'spits when he coughs'-hes-shook//(when people say stuff as they cough to hide it) 6

Ya scared cuz like 'buzy librarians' of-course-he-booked, this geezer needs 'viagra' hes-soft-just-look// 7

Ill rock-ya-frame, admin should block-ya-name, ya live in RB you got more 'posts' then 2 'B-ball-games'//(b-ball=basketball) 8

Im 'warning this guy' and im not talkin 'about-aim', get socked-insane, Like 'biggie you eastcoast rappers' all get 'shot-the-same'// 9

Believe-me, Triple, catch ya kid missin on T-V, you aint no G-see, faggot reminds me of the 'brady bunch' how he said i was 'dreamy'// 10

Leave you-queasy, Wouldnt be 'off the top' rockin 'a-beanie', im tremendous, ya style compared to mine is tiny(tine-e)// 11

'Crash' this faggot like 'nasdeq', this kids a 'petafile', thats why hes 'askin for my-adress'// 12

Caught in a plaid-dress, its ironic that your a dick, since ya ass is-nadless'// 13

Act-quick, 'stone' you 'leg first', i 'rock-shins', playboy says 'follow wat your best at' but 'suckin co<k is not-an-option'// 14

This bitch nigga stay talkin' bout how niggas he been through//
He nothin' more than a 2 bit faggot that see's more dick than condoms do//
Punkass bitch, u softer than cookie dough, they should call u betty crocker//
Tryin' to act hard on the cpu, knowin' damn well u nothin' but a Kmart shopper//
Your whole style is weak, that verse u dropped at best is bleak//
All ya punches were meek, throughout the whole verse they play'd hide an go seek//
I'm exposin' ya verse as wack, cuz I'm throwin punches wit arms bigger than shaq's//
Give up rap, cuz fans don't take kindly to white boyz that think wearing fitted caps make'em black//
I look at you wit disgust, cuz u must quit rhymin', u spit so much bullshit that it dried an crust//
I mean trust, if you continue pump ya self up wit more hot air u gon' spontaneously combust//
Your rhymes I can't take, their blan an preplanned, an I demand they be canned//
Cuz u fake, here's a suggestion, jus take a seat an figure out where you stand//
For rap u have no nack, your complete crap, jus for thinkin' u hot u need to be beaten wit a strap//
You trapped, cuz I exposed as a fake, now get outta my face wit ya backpack raps//
You thought you was the man, you just a lillte boy tryin' to stand tall//
Work on ya rhymes, before u walk u crawl, cuz u so small, standin' strait up I'm still slappin' u in the face wit my balls//

Hold That!!!^^^^

My Breakdown
 

Here it is:

Triple N- Everysingle fuckin' time!:

This bitch nigga stay talkin' bout how niggas he been through//
He nothin' more than a 2 bit faggot that see's more dick than condoms do//

Your the only person I know on this site that opens a battle so hard and personal. It sets the tone off and makes thr challenger worried. I liked your flow a lot, you had nice hard personly's and punches. Your structure was strong also. Great sense of wordplay.

Kl!K- Try to start off harder then you did. Your flow was a little shaky, you had too many misplaced words that threw half of your rhymes off and made your flow weak. You had good punches but Triple N had better personly's then you. Try to make your structure stronger and work on your rhyme scheme a lil' bit.

Vite- Triple N.

triple n came out with a nice opener solid ass punch in it and solid punchs and personals threw the battle some ill shit had preety good wordplay and a shit load of multies in the verse to overall a tight verse


klik opener was decent most of your punchs threw the battle were decent just didnt have much wordplay in them 2 me had some good multies just seemed like it was thrown together didnt flow very well when i read it

vote triple n

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Klik what the fuck is with the ------ after every fuckin word.......thats retarted and half the shit didnt make sense like bringen techs to ur crotch do you like to do that or somthin....anyways drop-da-fuckin-hyphens

Triple N hot verse nice opener nice verse all togethere work on structre and punches but overall flowed good

Triple-N-Gets-My-Vote

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dat was a good ass battle to me i dont kno who da fuk to vote for na mean

Uppin for some well explained botes on this, holla back!!

Alright kl!k WTF Is Up With The - - - -- - - - After Most EverySingle Mother Fucking Got Damn Word!!! !!!!!!! What The Hell Is Up With That Shit Alright!!

First: Evelate
Second: Battle Against FreeStyler's That Aint Heated
Third: Quit With The Fuckin - -- - - - - - - After Every Single Got Damn Word
Fourth: You Could Use Some Work In Almost Every Aspect Of Each Category! Structure, Flow, Verse, Rhyme Scheme, WordPlay, Vocab, Creativity, Etc;

Alright This Battle Was Pretty One Sided!! Im Going To Have To Side With Triple_N On This One Though!! Checck It

This bitch nigga stay talkin' bout how niggas he been through//
He nothin' more than a 2 bit faggot that see's more dick than condoms do//


^Nice PunchLine!!!!!! 9/10

I look at you wit disgust, cuz u must quit rhymin', u spit so much bullshit that it dried an crust//
I mean trust, if you continue pump ya self up wit more hot air u gon' spontaneously combust//

^^Again Very Nice Punchline Dropping Decent Bars!! And Safe Multies In There Also!!

Vote: Triple_N

my breakdown for klick:
overall 7 10
best lineIm 'warning this guy' and im not talkin 'about-aim', get socked-insane, Like 'biggie you eastcoast rappers' all get 'shot-the-same'// 9

breakdown for triple_n:
overall 8/10 bes;ine :This bitch nigga stay talkin' bout how niggas he been through//
He nothin' more than a 2 bit faggot that see's more dick than condoms do//
my vote goes to triple n