These Times
 

from before when time defined it necessary to climb over others
essence of life smothered, fighting erupted even between brothers
the powers that be, with an iron hold on the majority mentally
free thinking slowly sinking into the depths of history
you see statistically, mortality rates rising every year
governments fear, that people could realise the conspiracies here
those that shed tears living in poverty, fight to survive
whilst others immigrate and the state gives them a better life
ignoring british rights, some of our own live in building sites
Fat cats get excessive bonuses and this causes strife
Some people work hard and never get anywhere,
feel despair, Others subtract reality, feelings not there
devoid of care, its true some bring upon themselves calamity
But as I pen these words someone is trying to damage me
for I speak unspoken truths, propagate my message to the youth
The next step is to uncover the darkness and bring proof..

good post man im impressed. good word play, very strong vocab, all makes sense theres no dead spots where it looked like u were strugglin. im impressed by the overall rhyme scheme/style u brought out. good work

Thanx

yeah...it was a nice lil flow...but you need to use more multis...and put more metas in ur stuff...overall it was iite

Aight cool