FEEDBACK THISS READ MEEEEEEE(are world)
 

this is to show people how fucked are world is

cant rock a trench coat 5 years after colembine/ :shoot:
cant resort to nines or even say scarface lines

probly when i turn sixteen get handed a m-16/
and get told to join the mareins but that aint me

they say that the kids are the leaders of tomarrow/
but thats only gonna bring more mournin and sorrow/
a new world but there'll be no more footsteps to follow/
they say it's a good trade for the bodies they barrow

but see they never bring them back/
nothins in tack/
emotions gone haywire your left arm is not attached/
same world in the streets the same in iraq/
if your not blown up by a mine you'll get blown by a gat

the fags and lezes trans and hermafidites/
trina turn my head from whats important in life

turn my head back thats not my priority/
but the FCC thats a nother story

if you fuckin say butt you gonna get charged/
fuckin get fined or put behind bars

im sorry if this shit gets serious/
but i feel strongly in this shit

my fuckin gym teacher tells the class to roll on my ass/
but step in my shoes that bitch wont last

alter boys gettin raped by mutha fuckin preist/
imma go a-wall ya'll awakin the beast

yo man that shit was deep....fo reel.... its true life mane, im feelin that, keep up on your shit, yo man u should check out what i spit and tell me wat u think man, holla, 1 luv, oh mine is titled feed back and critisism appreciated, LyRiKaL19

nice work hatter. this is the best ive seen from you so far. keep up the good work cutty. one.

s.v. the kingpin