demobx vs. missfiyagurl
 

ya know the rules u droppin' first ya got 15 minutes...
15 to 30 lines
ya know the rest no d/r
aight
let's go

hey, this looks like it gun be a good battle, but while you guys are spittin will you do me a favour and hit up my battle wit AKA ... thx, I will return the fav when this battle is over: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118510

I spit balls of fire like a baseball cage, got barricades at the exits of the street arcade
for bitches like u that wanna invade and claim gansta, i'll engage in a battle with u even fasta,
to shut u down got u running out of town looking all around like a dog chasing its tail, got u thinking im a rap genius like from yale
or some shit got u wanna change ure sex dumb quick
to a dick to use the balls, cause im tearing u up like jaws, forget the laws and the whole system worry about u as my victim,
trippin over my rhymes, frivolously trying to copy my lines,
cause im top of the line i throw u in the dirty dungeon , thinking u dime a dozen, i go and get my little cuzzin finish off the rest which was really nothing to begin with,
talking shit better bust out the blistex knock the breathe out your chest and thats just a reflexx
so don't let ya head get gased like helium balloon send you back to your cacoon, with your destiny full of doom
got u in ure room with ya stomach stirring slowly stirring up ya sole ya phony spitting up ya guts till ure left bony,
skin sagging like u used to be a fat man the only difference is i put u in this postition now i can see through u like a catscan
better put the fire to ure pen and ure pad cause i red flagged grimy bitch from the bronx signing off and thats how i bang :shoot:

need i try!!!
 

come on now...

school is out ya ass has been dismissed
left ya stirred like a novel of suspense
not yet developed like a fuckin’ embryo
ya can’t touch Fiya ya stuck in the arroyo
ya deadly opponent just call it a 'fatal attraction'
got tha virgin crampin’ like she havin’ contractions
she knows it all but can’t recall her name
guessin’ by syllables like we playin’ charades
stuck in the lab, cause she’s born from test tubes
writin’ from her Ass like the Shit come to her rescue
just like the Emcees her rep. is destructable
when I relax, her ass is finally comfortable
my spit mo’ structured than memo templates
ya bones mailed to ya house like fuckin’ rebates
just for you, i'm talkin' blunt and quite aseptic
ya spit so much trash garbage scared to accept it
leave ya ass bedridden she's a victim of epitome
see no one wants her now she lookin' at sodemy
givin’ animals erections, nature use her like glucose
hype and stuck on lessons I hold her rank like Kudos
keep ya fuckin’ excuses saying that I wrecked ya mic
askin’ fa mo’ BARS wut would you do like KLONDIKE…

i didn't think i had to come hard fa this one... come on now.

Vote On My Battle - And I'll come back and Vote Honestly On yours..

Stay Up 1ne

Help a brotha out and vote on this shit heres the link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119962

flow - Missfiyagurl i think had a smoother flow
punches - Demobx takes this one, had a lot harder punches

"I spit balls of fire like a baseball cage, got barricades at the exits of the street arcade" best start up line goes to demobx

overall i think demobx just takes the win, very close though

Missfiyagurl-better punches,nice flow,vocab was sick,only thing work on ur closing...besides that uve elevated and thats good

Demobx-i guess u didnt come hard enough,up ur vocab,come at ur oppenets hard,every1's structure and flow is always good...work on ur MULTIES...if ur not good with punches sometimes multies will get u a win...MAYBE...besides that u tried...

vote-Missfiyagirl..

ANY1 WHO VISITS THIS CAN U PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLE....PLEASE

QUICKPUNCH VS D~ILLER

alright battle but I gotta give this battle to miss, she had a better flow goin, started off pretty bad .. but kept on flowin and threw in some hard punches, mob man you just gotta work on your flow and structure.. that shit was iight.. had some alright punches just didnt flow to well... vote-miss

Both were good but I thought miss flowed better, which made the punches harder. Demo, you had some good shit going, but you need to work on the flow and tighten it up a little. Vote = miss.

I thought that Demo came wit a lot harder punches and that is what wins battles. Missfya took it too easy in this one and it cost her dearly..............

Vote - Demobx

aiight this was a ncie battle demobx had some nice personals/punches and im loving the multis and thats where i think he won at..miss spit a couple multis but i just wasnt feelin her verse it was too simple...nothing complex in it really....and miss for future reference sodomy does not rhyme with epitome...they sound like they do but if u pronounce it right they dont..no offense good battle

vote: demobx

missfiyagirl took this shit she had a plain spit that i could understand

demobx i just wasnt feelin yo spit this time ma bad ma guy G/l next battle

heres how it went down

open: demo
close: Miss
personals: Miss
metas: Miss
punches: Miss
multis: Demo
SO MA VOTE GOES TO Missfiyagirl

wtf
 

i got 4 votes but only three shown up...
okay y'all need to get off that stuff...

Missfiyagurl-better punches,nice flow,vocab was sick,only thing work on ur closing...besides that uve elevated and thats good

Demobx-i guess u didnt come hard enough,up ur vocab,come at ur oppenets hard,every1's structure and flow is always good...work on ur MULTIES...if ur not good with punches sometimes multies will get u a win...MAYBE...besides that u tried...

vote-Missfiyagirl..