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streetsweepa vrs. triple_N part 2
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no dr no crew votes no hate votes good luck no hard feelings |
Yo why would you set up the battle then sign off, man I'll drop when your online!
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yo im online drop now playa |
Your shit reeks, an its sad cuz you've reached ya lyrical peak
Ya style's like pussy, only drops hot shit once every 4 weeks You still wouldn't be hot if u got a jay-z's lyrics in an injection U reflect imperfection, rhymes old & moldly, like they got a "yeast infection" Your rhymes are weak, that shit I'm obligated to disguard Cuz if ya rhymes took viagra they still couldn't "cum hard" Your rhymes are shit, they're disgustin', they spue shit in mass They got xactly disease, cuz they smell xactly like your ass Its hard for u to envision, but your ass I'm a gonna plaster Cuz if wack was a religion you'd be wack's "grand master" I hate fack emcees like u, that try to act hard all the time Hardest thing u've done is put exclamation point at the end of ya line He dreams if being in G-unit, he fantasizes about being a real killa Your in the zoo division of G-unit cuz u look like a actual "gorilla" Your whole style and persona is gay, outta all fake's u the worse Cuz ya gayness is so prominent that ya rhymes come wit a "customary purse" Hold That jus a quick lilttle drop, Holla!! |
u actually think your ryhmes " tight" u say there "tha bomb"//
your the fake "mc" you stole your lyrics from elton john// shit after i right this ryhme you wont wanna respond// yo your the " gay" your ryhmes are about as tight as that hole in ya ass// your the wack mc so face the fucking facts// yu got no freinds but u still your mom has your back// man theres no way u can fucking beat me every thing about u is wack// i finally found out what they make glo-in-the-dark condoms for// so at night u and j-poll can play star wars// thats some fucked up shit what u do behind closed doors// dont deny it ur his gay man whore// ill knock you out with my use of exquised use of hott verbz// shit your so wack after this battle youll be lost for words// my shit doesnt reek, its closer than ull ever get to superb// the way you prance around like a fairy gets on my nerves// your the little queer dont cry noone likes a whiner// dont deny ur gay u hug guys nutts like a swimming trunk liner// u say im wack but i served your ass like food at a diner// im only a flyweight and still beat ur ass but i give it to u ur a fighter// the fact is your the macgyver of all dickriders// |
This is aight but I gotta give this one to tripple...thats cuz tripple had better punch and multis no hard feeLINGS DAWG
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
you gotta explain ya vote dogg, damn that shit prolly gon get d'qued
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yea u gotta explain that shit better |
I gotta give this battle to triple for better flow and harder punches, street you did your thing but I was just feelin triple more... you gotta get your shit together more and start throwin some harder punches and you will get better. vote - triple
RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119791 |
Well i vote for triple because to me it seemed his shit flowed better,structure looked better to me,and he had more punches that connected than streetsweepa,also triple had a bit of multis crackin off at the beginning there so...
Vote-Triple |
vote 3 he simply had better punches and nice multis
3 i liked ur multis u could work on more personals ss good flow u need to work on ur vocab personals and structure |
Uppin for some well explained votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Triple_N Got This SHit Just Because He Had' .. Harder Punches...!! & Vocab' ..!! Lol Shit Was Funny... Check It!!!
Your shit reeks, an its sad cuz you've reached ya lyrical peak Ya style's like pussy, only drops hot shit once every 4 weeks ^Lol An Alright Opener Nice Multie In There Also 8/10 Your whole style and persona is gay, outta all fake's u the worse Cuz ya gayness is so prominent that ya rhymes come wit a "customary purse" ^Nice Closer!!!! .. Feelin It 9/10 u actually think your ryhmes " tight" u say there "tha bomb"// your the fake "mc" you stole your lyrics from elton john// shit after i right this ryhme you wont wanna respond// ^WTF That Shit Was Most Deff Weak 2/10 your the little queer dont cry noone likes a whiner// dont deny ur gay u hug guys nutts like a swimming trunk liner// u say im wack but i served your ass like food at a diner// im only a flyweight and still beat ur ass but i give it to u ur a fighter// the fact is your the macgyver of all dickriders// ^^Alright.. WTF? Is This Shit' .. Stay Wit 2Lines... 4Lines Or 5Lines' ...!! Your Shit Was All Over The Place...!! Vote: Triple_N |
Dude Streetsweepa those personals were off the hook dawg here is my vote
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that wuill get dqued 22222222222222222222222222222222222222222222
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