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Demobx-Vs-DeNounced
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You can neva eva fuck wit a bitch like me got u wobbling fucking up ure symetry,
with third degree burns cause i lyrically cause u to burn nows its ure turn to throw ure rhymes in a yearn u set the terms and i killed them like a villian ive renounced your denounced establishment like ive killed ya -and overthrown your possibilities of enhancement, better off going to a beauty pageant cause ure silence is the way to get a fragment of success u fuckin wit nothing but the best whos only interest is to leave you sleepless in yo' bed d-e-m-o tatood on your head like the three sixes come with artillery equipment and a new shipment comes into effect when any motherfucka tries to disrespect become my pet rock and stay in your position now u ask for permission like im your girl and im pussy wippen got u trippen over my lines and im a gemini double the blows shooting up your spine l ike an epideral u running slow like a turtle tightening up your gurdle till ya choke even when u swimmin got u doing the breast stroke just to see if coming taking prozack cause i got u buggin u nothin but lightweight im a venoumous snake ready to swallow u whole but u might make my belly ache from ure rusty ruins your nothin but a dusty student whos losing to THIS bitch DEMO FROM THE BRONX WHO DONT GIVE A SHIT |
Aye ..that was some good shit...ill drop in a bit...
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Ill leave this wanna be 'wrapper' out on the ground like i was a fat kid on halloween-
Your punches cant-be-seen,and beatin-me aint gonna happen like oj never fled from the scene- Think your hard kid in your division your runnin with-queens- Leave this kid obscene,while i spit clean,you need a little help with the 'slickness' going through tubes of vaseline- If i slowed the-beat this kid aint catchin-me,ill 'split' ya 'personalitys' like this kids name was kid cassidy- Your raps are like shakespear cause this cat only spits-in-tradgedys,and everything you write should be considred as blasphemy- Ooops sorry i already got you on vocabulary,know me as scary,what are you like 12 kid?..where-the-hair-be?- If i was tinkerbell your still more fairy,leave this kid in 'rotten clumps' like he was bad dairy- Dropped the full sixteen kid i just ripped you in less than ten- And when this battles over id be more than happy to sodimize you again- Damn...lmao...lets see the votes... |
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Thanks pimpin..not a bad verse yourself....
lets get some votes.... |
Man i gotta break from my normal format and just say DAMNN!!!!!! this vote will not say why De shoulda won but this vote will help DEMO up his skill demo try and make your lines the same lengh, and try to make them rhyme..when you write your verse try sayin it out loud and see if it flows and make your punchlines hurt and not i'm talkin about yo mama jokes...keep battlein and up yourself
Ill leave this wanna be 'wrapper' out on the ground like i was a fat kid on halloween- Your punches cant-be-seen,and beatin-me aint gonna happen like oj never fled from the scene- ^heh, sounds like 50s fat kid line.....kinda Your raps are like shakespear cause this cat only spits-in-tradgedys,and everything you write should be considred as blasphemy- Ooops sorry i already got you on vocabulary,know me as scary,what are you like 12 kid?..where-the-hair-be?- ^clever |
sorry I forgot to return the fav, my vote goes to De for better flow and better multis and some hard hittin punches...dam your shit was iight... your lines were a lil un-even and some of your lines didnt ryme work on that stuff and you'll get better.
vote - De |
^no problemo g...thanks man..and uppin.................
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overall this batttle was cool both cool but denounced did almost everything a little bit better then demo..demo u need to elevate and maybe then u could of won .. other than that no hate..my vote goes to denouced
drop an honest vote on ecko vs shadowsedge http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119917 |
come on folks ...only need 2 votes here..why is it so hard to get votes????...votes please...come on its not hard...
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http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1237919
wat up yall click the link above and hook a brotha up wit some votes |
Vote on either of the battles in my sig and drop a link, I will give an honest vote on this battle.
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^this gets annoying...i need votes here..your links dont help..lmao...
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Shadow...i dropped a vote pimpin...drop an honest vote here if you could...thanks...
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