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Black Thief v Shadows Edge
Hmm.. rules up to you... if you don't make any I'll just drop right after you...
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yo shadow wanna battle....i'll vote on this when u both finish
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Uppin for Black Thief.. if you still wanna battle.. or we can just close this.. I almost forgot about it :laugh:
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my bad....som many battles I forgot but its cool
Im bout to kill this cat in this fuckin battle have u on tha "edge" of fuckin bein scared of ya own "shadow"(shadows-edge) read between tha lines kid...my lyrics go way deeper than u think...i grip ya neck and put ya in a sleeper Killin you softly wit words....Im tha real grim reaper ya name is whack...it couldn't be any cheaper ya lyrics?they played out like hip-packs and beepers! tha only way ya shit could be hot is if u read mine I spit like Armor-all....all my lyrics got shine destroy ya self esteem...ya shyt aint makin connections ya shyt bout as hard as a dick wit no erection nigga I spit hot shit by tha masses to destroy cats like u....fuckin net nerds thinkin they shit classics Ya only wins were against weaks...just lokk at ya credits Man Im slaughterin you like this shit is a nasty fetish Come in like a ghost...call me a phantasm My shit so strong...even ya mom feels it and catches orgasms have her in spasms movin up and down tell her to keep her ass up and her head down she got a thang for rappers Have her lookin like she bobbin for apples Cut ya flesh and pur acid in ya wounds.... Know that ya met ya fate...ya record is doomed |
Ayo.. check it:
It's just plain fucking sad, check this cats age (19) And still couldn't get a job for minimum wage Occupation: bill collector... like he bum his friends bills Only thing this cat thieved is his sister's birth control pills He fraid to get knocked up the way I come so damn hard Spit so fucking hot, touching the mic leave ya hand scarred Cat got two quarters to his name and think he 50 Cent Quit chasing fame... spit one bar n your talent spent Battl'n herbs is something I don't do generally.. But just for now I'll play Ulysess S. n General Lee Whoop this cat's ass all over the fucking south You gotta know shit's what you get for running yo mouth Cat call himself Black Thief, though really meant he Lack Bief (beef) You sickness just a false belief, but when you die it's still a fucking relief |
Hmm... somehow it cut out two lines there at the end.. between the last two, put this in:
The way he got a nine milliy willy.. good grief! Think he hot smoking a floral leaf, I leave him sleeping on a coral reef |
umm okay ima give an honest vote and a real wun nahmean di battles goes da black theif hands down cuzz shadow u was sayin some dumb shit..."stealin ya sister's birth control pills"????? wow but ima break it down pause!
structure-shadow opener-black...nice opener punchlines-black hands down wordplay-nun multi's-shadow...u had a few personals-black finisher-shadow..good endin dat shit was hard enjoyed-umm i gotta go with black...he had a real battle verse...if ya'll was battle face da face da crowd a feel it..nahmean shadow ya verse was goodbut soem shit u cant say when u battlin my vote-black http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118364 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118442 ^^^^ THERE GO 2 OF MY BATTLES RETURN DA FAVOR PLEEZ |
Um.. ok I had wordplay but thanks for the honest vote... uppin ^^
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uppin this bitch
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uppin this bitch
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Upping for votes... don't sleep on this people ^
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Shadow - I liked your flow alot, it went well.. your spit was pretty hot wit some hard hittin punches in there.
Best Line - It's just plain fucking sad, check this cats age (19) And still couldn't get a job for minimum wage )nice opener( Worst Line - Occupation: bill collector... like he bum his friends bills Only thing this cat thieved is his sister's birth control pills Black - good spit man, had an alright flow going and some good word play wit some pretty good punches. Best Line - NONE really stood out. Worst Line - Im bout to kill this cat in this fuckin battle have u on tha "edge" of fuckin bein scared of ya own "shadow OVERALL - this was a pretty good battle, but I gotta give my vote to shadow, I was feelin his flow more and he had some hard punches in there. He also had some good wordplay goin... black man, your shit was good to just didnt flow and good, and the punches wernt as hard. Good Battle. VOTE - Shadow RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119893 |
Aight man.. thanks for the feedback. Uppin for more votes
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