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Def Star 04-19-04 08:06 PM

Def Star vs. Oc6 The Caustic
 
10-20 lines
Verses due whenever, just don't take too long
No hate, crew, D/R votes
No feeding
Good luck

Def Star 04-19-04 08:07 PM

Checkin' in...

Oc6 The Caustic 04-19-04 08:34 PM

check in............................................

Oc6 The Caustic 04-19-04 08:45 PM

Come on man you said a blind spit, I'm finsihed. Tell me how its going down.

Oc6 The Caustic 04-19-04 08:59 PM

What the hell you doin? Are you ready, I have been done for 15mins, put the dictionary down and post yours up.

Def Star 04-19-04 09:04 PM

I'ma newbie on this site but I got 5-0 battlers challengin' me
It must be my karma, but no worries, I'll merk this guy, see
This guy doesn't really understand the true essence of rappin'
Sorry dog, u have no future in rhymes, but u got talent in actin'
Cause you sign on to Rap Battles actin' like your ass is real hard
I'm a basketball man, not football, but even I can punt ur ass far
Normally, I would spare this wack shit the pain of badly losin'
But I'm in a bad mood, so I'll fuckin' merk those of my choosin'
Deep down he wants to shock the world, but all he can pick up is static
Right now I ain't even thinkin', merkin' this muthafucka is automatic
I can understand your reasoning by wantin' to battle every newbie
Cowardice, but battlin' me? You might as well scream "school me"
Been rappin' since you were ten? U'd think u woulda elevated, son
Maybe u'll be a rapper someday, though, ur already RB's Biggest Pun
Hell, that's the way the cookie crumbles, I'll just have to eliminate
I'm about to place a loss on ur record, but I hope that won't make ya hate
I have fighting talent, enough to do lyrical surgery on you, my brethren
Here comes Def Star, time to perplex ur mind, better go grab ur Excedrin.
Later

Def Star 04-19-04 09:05 PM

Damn, dawg, be patient. I had to go cook food for my family. Post ur verse.

Oc6 The Caustic 04-19-04 09:07 PM

Ok
 
This cat has me pissed, i'm in the midst to make sure Def Star don't exsist/
Rookies like you claim you shit belongs in the booth, you just another noob, on my hit list/
He was afriad, so he made me spit blind/
After this he is gonna be scared to click submit reply/
Settin' up a battle with me, your just askin to be human bait/
My rhymes hit you up so far it'll land you back to the NY State/
Better pay attention because my opponents call Me Federal/
New cats like you I lay out flat as if you were 2Demesional/
After your first loss you better take notes/
Because I can type letters blind-folded on cats like you and still get enough votes/
I'm makin an honest prediction, your just a noob for a first battle win addiction/
But there is just too many real facts to prove your style is fiction/
I'll put a frontline of lyrics through your chest while you still alive/
So big enough you can see the scenery by looking from both sides/
I don't sprint all out, I take my steady pace around the track/
You set up too many battles underneath your shoes while Oc6 has you lapped/
He put a blank spot on his sig for wins in Elevated Frontlines, like he'll get that far/
Maybe his prayers to get wins ain't hearing him, because he is wishin upon a Def. Star/

Oc6 The Caustic 04-19-04 09:18 PM

Aight here we go uppin for votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Oc6 The Caustic 04-19-04 10:03 PM

Can we get a vote on this please, holla^^^^^^^^^^^^

Bojangler 04-19-04 10:25 PM

nice -- oc6 had that battle. nice wordplay and dope punches. defstar -- good flow, but it could have used more personals.

best lines:

He put a blank spot on his sig for wins in Elevated Frontlines, like he'll get that far/
Maybe his prayers to get wins ain't hearing him, because he is wishin upon a Def. Star/

I have fighting talent, enough to do lyrical surgery on you, my brethren
Here comes Def Star, time to perplex ur mind, better go grab ur Excedrin.

Oc6 The Caustic 04-19-04 10:58 PM

Thanks for the honest vote, don't forget the poll vote playa. Still uppin'^^^^^^^^^

Oc6 The Caustic 04-20-04 02:23 AM

1-0 Me, Can we get some votes on this ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Gh0St MC 04-20-04 02:37 AM

imma give dat to OC6 cause he had a betta flow...Props to def star doe


Vote:Oc6 The Caustic

Gh0St MC 04-20-04 02:38 AM

YOO!!!!! i clicked da wrong THING!
are u aloud 2 delete dat shit? yo put anotha thread yo fa real..!


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