Def Star vs. airclaire23
 

10-20 lines
Verses due whenever, just don't take too long
No hate, crew, D/R votes
No feeding
Good luck

Checkin' in...

when they give me the mic i make sure i spit fire//
have you feelin like kanye when he came through the wire//
i'm on a mission to give u this real dissin and have you wishin u neva enter this freak show//cause this lyrical game is difficult mane and if u ain't ready you're lyrics are likely to blow//ya can't chop ya can't rock ya can't hold the mic//ya have no rhythm so to save ya i'm gon end this fight

dog what happened i thought ya wantin to battle//but you moved away like a baby cow from the cattle//runnin scared like a little punk ass bitch//man face ya fears stop runnin into the ditch//probably got a raggedy car with the rusty hubcaps fallin off//maybe next time at my next block party i'll tell xzibit to pimp your car/your a sorry excuse for somethin we call mankind//now its time to get yours cause i got mine

yo i'll hit this up when the nigga drops...as of now can u check out my battle its in front lines...its quickpunch vs d somethin...thanks

yooooooooooooooo dat new dude bittin like a mofo 4rm 1 of my prevous battles ill find it an copy an paste it to yah

E-yo, what the fuck is this little bitch talkin' to me for?
I've never seen a bigger mouth with a verse so piss poor
Droppin' like 6 lines what the fuck you think this is, a Cypher?
It's funny, I ain't even spit and cat's come callin' u a biter^^
A shame, that a new site like this gotta be infected with wackness
I'm happy I got a battle, now I can put you on my smacked list
Wanna talk about me like you know me, but you only know defeat
What's that? You didn't catch the merkin'? Well, let me repeat
Ur game is fuckin' up, bitch, you're the worst in our community
I don't know if there's a place in the world for wack, but it ain't RB.
Later
*Kinda weak, but I merked him.*

Def. Star had this battle. I don't know if you bit or not Air but I really don't car. You rhymes were too elementary and weak, you need to elevate on your punches and come at him with better personly's. Your structure seems good , but watch your wordplay, it threw some lines off. Def. Star had a better flow and has very personal, always a plus. Try to come at him with harder punches though Def. Your structure is decent and You both need Multi's, very important. Anyways Def. had the better flow.

Vote- Def. Star

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ok def killed this kid with flow and punches

Def=5/10
air=2.3/10

return favor plz vote on #4 in sig plz

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