Whats good
 

Im ready for ya go first

Your style is not just bitten, you basically ate-me
You can hate me, but your verse like ghetto kids asking the creator “why did make-me?”//1

If your wack lines were a baby, he or she would have no hands-or-legs//
You cooked on daily basis like ham-and-eggs//
Your Plans-ain’t-met cause you stand-this-red//
Fail to “hit hard” where it counts like Rams-at-rest//
I stand-the-best above this 20 year old living-in-the-Bronx//
Leave you like injured ballers in the paint, crying-in-your-block//
Sad that you never escape the life of pain and hate//
A life of drugs and glocks, but you never open this lock to victory//
You could have SARS or Mad Cow, but you never look sick-to-me

You will never see a W even if we flopped wins//
I’m like kids who quit school before this emcee cause I out-dropped-him

DemoBx
 

My bad i didnt get back my computer shut down

You say you a real nigga,
you as phony as Chers whole figure
inserted all the fat to yo head making it thicker
Tingling sensation starts to set on on your fingers
got u shook with just one look as the hypathermia lingers
You messing with a bronx walking time bomb bitch nigga
hit ya with forces thinking its unnatural causes
gonna want to turn to a morman
remorsing thinking its an apocalyps getting closer to u doom everline i'm droppin - shit is like hell -
blazing introduce u to satan
oh i forgot he already got ure soul taken once your balls i started breakin, fakin claiming gansta got niggaz who aint nothin to lose and got access to the boozaka as the answer
for all problems deal with you like you on the line up- of deathrow no parole nowhere else to go but to go
cause ure done fams
wont be able to produce like the lands in japan
blowing up in ure face like a shakin up soda can
instead its mased up now ure racing up to
emergency cause i currently hit u with such an urgency
intended to murder me now
ive recipricated
now theres someone on the other side for you waiting

again my bad for the lateness ONE

i think mikeikeda got this one. more personals, more metaphors and references, and good wordplay.

however, demobx gets props for his ill vocab.

vote on my battle:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119907

mike12ikeda your rhyme was all right but I couldn't feel the flow of it. Demobx your right was good I like some of the personals you put in you got my vote jman

ok i was feeling Mikes lines more...
Vocab and Flow
Your lines ryhmed and it flowed pretty good and vocab was pretty good some complex vocab here and there...

Pucnhlines and Personals
There were some and the ones that you had hit pretty hard

demobx
Vocab and Flow
umm vocab pretty basic and it flowed pretty good aswell

Punchlines and Personals
There were a couple but they didn't hit that hard and wern' that good...

Winner Mike

breakdown for dembx:overall
17/25
your best line:
You say you a real nigga,
you as phony as Chers whole figure
it was ok
breakdown for mike:
19/25
bestline:
A life of drugs and glocks, but you never open this lock to victory//
You could have SARS or Mad Cow, but you never look sick-to-me
my votre swings the way of mike
coo

Good battle...mike came wit the punches, he had good vocab, flow an structure was kinda fucked up, opener & closer was weak, but u had a few in the middle that hit hard
Dem....you had basic vocab, a good opener but that was about it, downhill from there, the rest of your punches didn't really hit hard, you flowed well, an good structure, but not enough to win, respect both y'all
Vote: Mike
Holla Back, Hot Battle!
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119899

yo mike mic took this but u had played rhymes and was real weak, but u actually had a few punches in there no matter how played they were, goin up agianst someone w/o any u win.
other guy check his puches

multi: Mike
Punch:Mike
thought in to it: Mike

aight..mike ur rhymes was good but still to simple

and demo box...ur rhymes were okay..but punches still weren't strong enough